Comments of chapter undefined of Game of Thrones: The First Elven King

Honestly your fanfic is one of the few things that are entertaining me these days, I hope you don't abandon it because it's very good.

all I'm waiting for now is for some weird ritual to make him a creature of magic that is more like lotr elves but with fire magic.

How big is Skagos Island? Can you compare it to a real world country and how big is the valley? ps: thanks for the chapter

I hope he's gonna ban slavery after the doom and make comments on how he can't change it as long as the valyrian freehold is stil standing. I really love the kingdom building aspects so more of that please.

Thanks for the Chapter the idea of using Naboo palace is really really good...I was struggling thinking of what Skyrim/TES palace you where going to chose...but this is better...skyrim one are too small...even Dragonreach...soo good job... For the house type what are you going to use? the HalfMoon city don't make it at the edge of the cliff, only the palace...it will make it more majestic and imposing... . . . I know...I'm not an artist...or that good at drawing...but I did it on train soo...here is it...

Thank you for the new chapter. When are we going to switch into another person’s POV as you said that right before Kael left Valyria? Also will we end up having a war arc in this story? Let there be Fire!

Huh, nice. I really do hope you rename Skagos to Skyrim though. It'd be nice for sure.

If the Starks and he make an alliance will he defend them from the Targaryens and help them remain independent?

Am I the only one who have fondness towards city building focus chapter. where they plan to develop this and that, agriculture this and that type of plant, have a trade with this and that city, integrated cultures to improve people. Have an exotic animals and plants to their city so they can breed and plant them in their own city, have their own warriors version like Unsullied, cavalry, etc. P.S. Why don't you make the free Cities (excluding Braavos) pay tributary income to House Regallyon. Let them rule themself, but make them pay something to Kael's house. Just like Pentos in the future where they pay tribute to the Dothraki.

Both kingdoms stand to gain, the North perhaps more of a source of trade, food and the MC an ally if he needs numbers, a culture that the elders go out to "hunt" to ease the family's burden is at least respectful, I don't remember the North losing a war to the South. I think they already had their ancestral sword at that time, a mini plot of how some swords appear? would be cool (more chapters for us hehehe). After all, the North remembers

Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter. 😁👍

Thanks for the chapter!

I wonder what he’ll do with the children of the forest maybe an alliance of sorts

love it 🤩🤩🤩🤩

Thanks

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.

Naboo style is really nice :P

Thank you kindly for the chapter 😁