Keep writing the way you were, it was much easier to envision everything with how descriptive it was. It also made chapters longer so that's definitely a plus.
the story is perfect, please keep your writing style as it is, and if anyone doesn't like it then they are can drop (and no need to announce that you are dropping, its sounds like author will lose something important cuz you dropped.)
You went from i guess over detailing things like what the place looked like to not even showing the adventure to the legendary lost dwaven city blackreach. may as well just skip skyrim straight to what it is you wanna write its so lifeless
