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Argentum9mthCommentedThis is exactly was I was talking about. There are no I-frames in real life so going for a riposte or backstab is much riskier for the MC.
However, the brief distraction proved costly. Another soldier seized the opportunity, lunging forward and slashing Adrian's back with a swift and vicious strike. Pain shot through his body, but he gritted his teeth, refusing to succumb to weakness. Adrenaline surged through his veins, fueling his resolve.- Argentum10mthCommented
Just realized that "I-frames" probably aren't a thing for him. So risposting and backstabs might be a much more situational thing for him.
Seizing the moment, the young man swiftly countered, plunging his broadsword into the creature's neck. A splatter of blood burst forth, and the assailant dropped to its knees, succumbing to its fatal wound. Its lifeless body crumpled to the ground, almost instantly silenced. - Argentum10mthCommented
A person with all the power of the universe and one with none of it.
Emma, who possessed no superhuman powers due to a freak accident, offered Grayson a sense of normalcy and a reminder of the simple joys in life as he helped her to gain her powers. - Argentum11mthReplied to Azaz_ZzzHe planned on visiting the Grave of the Thunder God in the future, but he wanted to do it only after Luffy was also set on his journey.
- Argentum1yrReplied to ysg
"Plot..."
The First Mate was still pleased with their progress, especially Wyper's who had completely caught up to Enel, who had also slightly improved. Francisco was shocked to find out just how talented his pupil was, but he didn't complain. - Argentum1yrCommented
"eyes that *are* tinted in red."
The aforementioned man sees clear blue skies, white clouds and a forest in his midst through his helmet, a black helmet with eyes that is tinted in red. - Argentum1yrCommentedCh 47 This book is a mess
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Correct me if I'm wrong but this seems to talk about the main storyline and the dragonborn/dawnguard DLC's as well. Couldn't figure out the last part, unless it's talking about Harkon.
*When dragons rule the sky once more, and the black hunger returns to its feast. When the last son vanquishes the first. The moon will rise again on the 1st of Sun's wrathful dawn, and the prince will rise up to face the lord of veiled dread.* - Argentum1yrCommented
Way better this chapter, author! I's still need to be capitalized but there are definitely less than last chapter. I'll go into the chapter comments later and write the mistakes I noticed, once again delete them if you want but I'm still going to do it with the hope that eventually I won't need to write them. Anyways, well done with this chapter author! I will be awaiting the next chapter. 👍
Ch 5 2 years later - Argentum1yrCommented
1 I needs to be capitalized, period after 'comfortably'.
4 years later i was living relatively peacefully alongside my family within the great stone walls of Windhelm. We had taken up residence within the Candlehearth Hall, where my mother and father had been granted residence in exchange for work. The pay was low but food and board were provided so we were living relatively comfortably - Argentum1yrCommented
2 I's need to be capitalized, period after 'effective'.
My name became well known amongst the locals, i was given nicknames such as "Radukar the frozen" due to my personal choice of training. While the other children such as my siblings, yes siblings as my mother had given birth to a pair of twins, named Vibi and Froe, played in the halls and begged the guards and their parents for training in weaponry i had a different approach. I would often expose my body to the elements, going as far as to swim in the frozen waters surrounding the city and meditating shirtless during the cold nights. And while this may have terrified my parents it was proving to be rather effective - Argentum1yrCommented
1 I needs to be capitalized, period after 'disease'.
Every day the cold of the north seemed to grow less and less biting, becoming often as dangerous as a spring breeze as my body grew harder and more resilient. Perhaps it was unnatural but it worked and thanks to a couple of visits to the temple of Talos a week i did not face the ill effects of disease - Argentum1yrCommented
1 I needs to be capitalized, period after 'arrival'.
Sometimes there were whispers amongst my fellow Nords, rumors surrounding the strange child who was far too wise and could survive the cold more fiercely than any other but in the end, it mattered little, even at the age of ten i had already grown strong enough to face grown men and any who could beat me were outside of Windhelm, away fighting in the great war. Thankfully my father was considered too important as a food supplier to the city to be sent away as he had been acting as a hunter for the Candlehearth hall since our arrival - Argentum1yrCommented
5 I's need to be capitalized, period after 'them'.
But soon the tides of fate began to tug at me, i had already resigned to waiting until i reached adulthood before i would act upon my memories. My original goal was to follow much the same path as i had already once, to become a warlord and fight and pillage until age caught up with me. Vampires, although far weaker than those in what memories i had, did exist within Skyrim, it would only be a matter of finding them - Argentum1yrCommented
Maybe just add a comma(,) after 'vision'.
But instead, I faced a vision - Argentum1yrCommented
3 I's need to be capitalized, period after 'it'.
It had been a cold day, like usual, and i had been making my way through the grey quarter, ignoring the glares sent in my direction by the numerous Dunmer who called the slums home. Thankfully as the child of Nords i had been spared the discrimination they now faced but i could understand why they would hate me for it