Comments of chapter undefined of Pokémon : A Rough Start In Kanto

Evolution

really hope the author continues this story. I honestly think it has the potential to be the best pokemon fanfic at this rate.

Thanks for the chapter! Great again!

Merry Christmas! Do we get a gift of a chapter? 😆

I still want more of thisssssssss. Baby come back, you can blame it all on me

Hey y, all Are there new chapters coming? Just found this story in the rankings but if no new chapters are released I am not even gonna bother starting to read this story. 😇

Let’s see a fake out!! Give me a magikarp!!! Cloyster is better than slowbro lol. And rip slowking if he evolves now

Uma Carvanha o pega novamente.

And...And....And...? do you have any idea how cruel that cliffhanger was!?🥺😭

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

thanks for the chapter. Hope to see you upload on either of your Pokemon books soon, they are really fun to read.

hi,i really Hope this story isn't dead because it's really great

pls update

Thank you!

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I don't know if you take suggestions but gravity sounds like a neat move for disruptions, instead of just blasting pokemon to the ground (which is still pretty cool) you could have it turn it up and down and odd intervals to trip them up, or if you really want to go crazy with the move, make a zero gravity zone so walking pokemon can't aproach, and they figure a way out, smash them to the ground again, or maybe repel them from the ground so they go flying, but this is more fanfiction territory with the powers so you might not like it, you can do what you want

thanks for chapter