Tftc

Thanks for the chapter

Tftc. Life really sucks. He arrived in a freak house. 😅.

Thanks for writing. Great story

I mean sure this would delay his plans but he just has to figure out how they did curse themselves and undo it. They had to have used the old gods. And even if the price for the end of house Bolton is the lord of house stark, it is still worth it to kill them all. Rip Rickard

Thanks for writing. I very much like the spin you took on Asoiaf with Ned, as long as he doenst become a full time prankster, the stark family, the story, conflicts with the south and magic. The characters and locations feel very much alive and "real" in a sense, maybe introduc a touch more information about how certain people or locations differentiate between each other. Scars, history with bandits, how streets smell. Something like that 😁 Keep up the good work. Have a great weekend. 😊👍

Great start :) Looking forward to the story.

Thanks

Well I hope they get out of there ASAP. It is a bad deal, a very bad deal. Robb marries for a bridge. Even as lord Stark it would be an insult and as a king even more. You can't trust the Frey's, even after the Wedding . I don't fear a competent enemy but an incompetent ally. And the Freys are not even allys. God's, I wish they would just smash "The Twins" to rubbles with artillery.

Ty for the chapter :) Are these businesses really profitable when you have to buy a good chunk of your resources from the south? The transport cost much be huge. Are the police officers soldiers or are they policemen? Or have they now become a proper army. I am confused about what their really do. I would love for him to be a stark in name as well. He can get himself a dragon from Valyria and doesn't need the Targaryan name in my opinion. To much bad blood. He will be more successful as a Stark. If he wants to be king he needs to conquer the kingdom anyway. Love the story

Cool story. But the "not having any more children" thing is too modern for me. It doesn't fit in the middle ages.

So everything is exactly the same as in the books? What role will our Mc play? Is he joining Robb in war or is Eddard surviving kings landing? I hope torrhen can at least preserve some strength of the north. Ps. : Shouldn't the dogs and wolves be able to smell the people in the tower with the windows open just above the place where Brann fell? Case closed I would say.

So, did the other northern lords do the ritual too, or did they just walked home? I am confused.

It would habe been better to have people from tarth do the work instead of the slaves. Although then it would have never been finished in time. For the commercial development fisherman comes to mind glassmakers, baker, and a barber. :💇‍♂️😁 Cool story 👍

There is a thin line between genius and crazy. He just stepped over it.

Great writing. The characters and citys/areas you describe feel alive and aren't just a common npc.

Stannis is an idiot and a fool if he keeps the former small council intact. At the very least he should execute Baelish, master pycell and varys.

I hope it works. The lannisters deserve a loss and saving northern lives while stalling them fits Ned. Is the Riverland Army stopping the Reach? And I guess Robb should/could have raided more keeps and stuff in the Westerlands.

Yeah, 😁 nice to see u came back. Didn't Robb raided the entire Westerlands? The lannisters are fighting on their last leg, so why does Stark even gives them a choice/chance? Stark should be more ruthless to his enemies. 👍😍

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