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starking
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I like your writing I have your novel in my library and I check it pretty much daily so I do like your writing and enjoy your book immensely so please continue to do so if I had some advice for you it would be that I would want you to give me more chapters also if you want something to make money with in this novel then I recommend inventing something getting the patent for it and then licensing it to a company for instance at the time of the main character in the novel I believe that the smartphone is not quite invented or is not as smart as it is today what you would do is use your system to find components for the modern smartphone and then make those components and then patent it and then maybe send something to the company to show that your patent is better and that they should use it you can always go with programming as well but I wouldn't necessarily do this because you have to have a background in that as to if you invent something it could be an accidental for like a school project or something or some kind of crazy idea that you want to try

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CultivatorReader
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Sorry about the authors note it's probably the last time I address hate in a chapter directly.

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Michael_Pratt_7647
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don't be afraid to add more tv shows too modern family world and thank you for the update

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Vex_900
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I really like this book don't let the hate get to you

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ButtNakedMan
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There are more things that you can do if you run out of ideas. Game scripts! or even RPG Board Games! game scripts as in Lore, you can use games with deep lore for example Witcher, Dark Souls, Warhammer, Mass Effect and Dragon Age. And also you can write the world background for Dungeon and Dragons!

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svenlol
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i like your story very much. I just hope there would be more interaction with alex

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K_vis
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Don't bother with the naysayers Mr.Author. I love your work and eagerly wait everyday for your releases. You are doing a fantastic job[img=recommend]

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Aedan
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Thx for the chapter moreeee Pls

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Aedan
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Hmmm u are a bit centered around books/shows/movies, when u get stuck in around these topics u could go towards manga/anime/games maybe even board games like DnD, Monopoly etc

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HaremHater10
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What happen to sports? I honestly believe that the mc being in "2" school sports team should be edited out, in the early chapter he was scouting players, how did he get that qualification? He never plays,.

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TigerOfTheWest
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Don't even worry about. I know from experience how annoying it can be, but just try to focus on what you want with your story:) Those who like it will stay, and those who don't, will leave. If the haters stay for more chapters then they probably don't hate it as much as they say haha

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DaoistJ2BfOl
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I like interesting that the mc can be a singer. I mean, one of the ways he earns points is if he marries one of the protagonists who is alex or his sister. imagine dedicating a love song

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High_Guys
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I really want a Goldberg situation, but with modern family towards the end

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snorlax_shiny
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Thanks for the chapter

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ReMormius
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+++

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Aditya_Chanda
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Thank you for the chapter

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Austin_Gage
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Thx for the chapter.

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dioltas
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thanks for the chap.

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Young_fruit_Smiley
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thanks for the chapter 😊

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AinzO0alGown
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shall I say first