If you are going to be a marine, I hope it is logical, not that he is a marine and kills celestial dragons because he feels like it.

The worst was to make him a marine, because in the time of piracy he must be a marine, besides, what is the D for.

those pokemon nicknames gamesz, if you use the nickname put the name of the pokemon next to it.

Nice

Iv?

I think Lucario was missing a couple of attacks. He has very few.I think he is missing, supersayayin god, sphere of maximum power and destroyer of the ethereal world of the sparkling blow.

Nice

Middleweight, Light heavyweight, Heavyweight. I said he have a system, he can go to the rout of the terror

Play guitarra is hard. I play since 12 years and i said "six years wasnt enought to pratice"

Crosssover

The idea is novel, it is the first time that they do not join common families like Freya, Loki or Hestia, or create a family with a broken god, the system you are thinking well, something curious, but you are good, i am wait more chapters should be more under the stars in chapter stability, for now I'll leave it like this.

it's too cliché

It's okay, try to follow a single point of view, and when you interact with the AI, let the interaction be seen, for the rest it's just that you have the impulse to keep writing.

too much filling, we have to know the thoughts of the thousand people in the world in the same place, what did tanjiro oenso, what did rengoku think, what did tamayo think, what did the rocks think, what did the birds think, the worst thing is that it is of no use, no You arrive nowhere different. Please stop with the abusive filling of chapters, a fight that lasted 500 words, extended 15 chapters

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So you give two stars because it doesn't have telekinesis?

Wow

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Yep