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Comments of chapter undefined of Script Writing System In Modern Family

Athenisia
AthenisiaLv4Athenisia

The dialogue is so cold and robotic that i cringed half of the time.

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MightyOzy
MightyOzyLv14MightyOzy

Perhaps writing a book like Lord of the rings Or Harry Potter first. Then maybe a comic or anime. Then maybe publish the script and get funding. Open companies under your name That gave the copyrights and can license for peripheral products. The system can also help find talented people to direct and produce for the mc and that are loyal. Some Ips for future consideration Transformers Marvel Dc King Kong Planet of the apes Godzilla Naruto Pokémon Sonic Dragonball Titanic Avatar Star Wars Juraissic park Et alien Alien vs predators Terminator Independence Day Lion king

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Bnathann
BnathannLv6Bnathann

who the he'll is Frank and where did he pop out from in conversation 😄

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Queen_Karina
Queen_KarinaLv13Queen_Karina

Will the grammar get better? All this “ryan spoke, Alex answered, ryan spoke” is super robotic

MinMinOppa
MinMinOppaLv4MinMinOppa

Just an advice but you shouldn't let MC publish books or scripts that aren't believable for 13 year old to make like Lord of the Rings. He can wait until he's older and more famous with his other works to publish works like those.

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BATMOBILE
BATMOBILELv1BATMOBILE

Thanks

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

Before you start adding in other people like frank and Emily you should first explain how we met them and how they got there instead of just having pop up out of nowhere, that's called bad background.

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YassineDSuLtAn
YassineDSuLtAnLv5YassineDSuLtAn

Thanks for the chapter

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AuthoriTet
AuthoriTetLv4AuthoriTet

Author, use 's. It kinda bothers me lol EX: Look who here -> Look who's here

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Kyran_Ambrosius
Kyran_AmbrosiusLv14Kyran_Ambrosius

Neat stuff

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Juhiko
JuhikoLv6Juhiko

nice no more system talking in the chapter

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Uncaged_Mango52
Uncaged_Mango52Lv4Uncaged_Mango52

Thanks for the chapter

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The_Battle_God
The_Battle_GodLv12The_Battle_God

Nice man 🔥🔥 Looking forward for more 💯💯

Insane_Fantasy
Insane_FantasyLv4Insane_Fantasy

tftc~~~○●

Humbuub
HumbuubLv4Humbuub

Hailey is so out of character. She wouldn't embarass Alex like that. she might give her a look, that's saying "he's cute" then walk away though.

Leirbagfcb
LeirbagfcbLv2Leirbagfcb

Im sorry but. Georgia is Way better than courrier new or any thing like this

Dhaliwal2
Dhaliwal2Lv6Dhaliwal2

They are only 13?

Mr_Cuak
Mr_CuakLv3Mr_Cuak

mc (Keanu reeves)

Mr_Cuak
Mr_CuakLv3Mr_Cuak

Mc pic?