"Naruhodo" - Naruhodo
no harem gang
bruh, normal one? he's got no excuse to not believe in supernatural things seeing as he's transmigrated and has a system, and with all the clues e.g the magus families, the mage killer, even Shiki summoning that dagger. it's just pure retardation at this point.
the overall grammar of the story since chapter 2 has gone down. a bunch of the sentences are confusing
if he had, then why didn't he notice her sister's presence when they passed by each other? be careful on making these quirks, because too many and you'll find yourself having plot holes in the story
what? this sentence is confusing. I think you switched up the perspectives.
I'm glad you like it* would be better. The previous one is more for someone giving permission, for example "You can go out with your friends as long as you like it."
Can we come inside? * would be better imo.
Life here didn't matter*
to become first*
scared out of his mind*
He was an observer*