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"Naruhodo" - Naruhodo
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AuthoriTet5dCommentedCh 82 THIS FANFIC WILL ONLY BE POSTED ON MY PA TREON**** Just $7 to join *************************************************************************************************************************************- AuthoriTet17dPosted
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trash inspiration
His inspiration came from here. - AuthoriTet27dCommented
no harem gang
Only then would there be a slight possibility. - AuthoriTet27dReplied to Operr
bruh, normal one? he's got no excuse to not believe in supernatural things seeing as he's transmigrated and has a system, and with all the clues e.g the magus families, the mage killer, even Shiki summoning that dagger. it's just pure retardation at this point.
"Yeah... well, I had a bit of a nightmare." Kazumi smiled a little embarrassed. - AuthoriTet27dReplied to Daoist6kNN3n
the overall grammar of the story since chapter 2 has gone down. a bunch of the sentences are confusing
But this also confirmed something... There were likely no magicians in this world, and even if there were, they were probably just as deceitful as this bunch, resorting to scare tactics. - AuthoriTet27dCommented
confusing
But in the Type-Moon world, it was different. Magus at this time were almost equivalent to "Magician" in other worlds. In this world, "Magician" were entities that had touched the root of the world to some extent— - AuthoriTet27dCommented
nvm 😅
She might be in the room, in the vicinity, or in that car. He couldn't determine the exact location. - AuthoriTet27dCommented
if he had, then why didn't he notice her sister's presence when they passed by each other? be careful on making these quirks, because too many and you'll find yourself having plot holes in the story
Just like in "JoJo's Bizarre Adventure," where JoJo and Dio could roughly sense each other's locations through their physical connection, Kazumi might not be able to sense him, but he had a rough sense of her whereabouts. She had detected him following her to school every day. - AuthoriTet27dCommented
what? this sentence is confusing. I think you switched up the perspectives.
If Kiritsugu had shot just now, he was confident he could have evaded it, relying on his intuition to dodge countless bullets... - AuthoriTet27dCommented
I'm glad you like it* would be better. The previous one is more for someone giving permission, for example "You can go out with your friends as long as you like it."
"As long as you like it," Kazuya said, then walked over to the bookshelf in his studio and took out two stacks of bound books, placing them beside the two visitors. - AuthoriTet27dCommented
Can we come inside? * would be better imo.
"Shall we stand here?" - AuthoriTet27dCommented
Life here didn't matter*
Life didn't matter, as he wouldn't die anyway... - AuthoriTet27dCommented
to become first*
Sometimes, when he was tired of observing and didn't want to focus, he treated it as a game and killed everyone to become the first—after all, it was just a dream, and he had seen these people how many times already? - AuthoriTet27dCommented
scared out of his mind*
At first, he was scared out of his minds, but now he was used to it. - AuthoriTet27dCommented
He was an observer*
He was observers. - AuthoriTet27dReplied to AuthoriTetCh 5 [5] The Editorial Department