Comments of chapter undefined of Da Boyz and I Got Isekai-ed and Now I am Trying to Conquer The World!

now this got me hooked ...lol

this is actually pretty cool

a good beginning, I love this work

great start

A friend of mine recommended this novel to try and have a look... (for review, comment, collection swap, if u don't mind) And I wanna point out two issues first. 1. The passages are kinda lengthy. I'm not expert but I was told and I also feel that lengthy passages are kinda hard to grasp and read fully. 2. Go slow on the detailing bro... it's packed with details but it's a little tooooo detailed, like everything was detailed with full blown description... for every passages. I can't say it's a bad thing, but I feel you can go a little easy on them. But overall I really enjoyed the synopsis and the concept. Also the characterisation is freaking great for the MC. We hear his thoughts, his frustration and his usual mundane routine... I would say it used the classic tropes very well. Very Very well. I'll continue with the rest... (And I'm interested in swapping. Let me know)

Okayyy So I found the concept is quite interesting and ready to dive in...the writing is beautiful and helped me a lot to imagine the character and actions throughoutly Well I'll try to read at least one or two chapter in a day... Plz consider our different timing tho

Me and the Boyz, haha, great prologue.

A good start. Can't wight to see what's installed for the boys. Some of the paragraphs are a bit long and could but cut to smaller parts for those who read using a phone otherwise I'm happy to ready on and see where the journey takes us.

This is my first time reading this genre novel and found it interesting I will support you. The story engagement is unique and for me... It's new. As you say that it's also your first time to write in this genre, It's pretty impressive, Keep it up.☺

Pretty awesome start, a relief that the MC had friends but then it was interesting how he got Isekai-ed with da boyz like the book's name says 😅

Great first chapter!

Noice

pretty awesome