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Kamelzy1

Kamelzy1

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just a little human.

2020-05-24 JoinedGlobal
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Replied to Harem_Queen

    thank youuu (つ≧▽≦)つ

    Ch 1 The Layers of Yamani Land
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    Seven Layers of Hell
    Fantasy · Kamelzy1
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Replied to Sakura_Charmash

    you too, thank youuu(つ≧▽≦)つ

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    Snow n' Starlight
    Fantasy · Sakura_Charmash
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Replied to Sakura_Charmash

    Thank youu(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)

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    Seven Layers of Hell
    Fantasy · Kamelzy1
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Posted

    The narration is very beautiful, I love how everything is well described, the depiction of the characters is very good, also the choice of diction. You will be amazed when you read the prolog! It's really worth read! Keep it up author[img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    Snow n' Starlight
    Fantasy · Sakura_Charmash
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Commented
    It is a young man; who veered on the edge between being a man and a child. He is tall, yet he had years yet to fill into his frame. His features are sharp, jaw set in a lithe line - yet his mouth had the fullness of childhood clinging to it. He would have made a pretty child, had it not been for his deep set, striking pair of silver eyes. They had the same sharp shimmer of a well cut blade yet none of his juvenile softness about them. As if to complete their sense of danger one of his cheeks is smudged with blood.
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    Snow n' Starlight
    Fantasy · Sakura_Charmash
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Posted

    This story has a unique and interesting concept, the story is also well presented, the main character has a fun nature to follow. Oh! This story is also well written. Great job author, keep it up![img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    Da Boyz and I Got Isekai-ed and Now I am Trying to Conquer The World!
    Fantasy · Zhoa_Fei
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Commented

    Its an interesting story concept, but please try to cut one long paragraph into 2-3 parts, it will be more comfortable to read. After all, this is a good story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

    Ch 1 Prologue: Fledgling Mediocrity
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    Da Boyz and I Got Isekai-ed and Now I am Trying to Conquer The World!
    Fantasy · Zhoa_Fei
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Commented

    woahhh nice concept👏👏

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    Da Boyz and I Got Isekai-ed and Now I am Trying to Conquer The World!
    Fantasy · Zhoa_Fei
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Posted

    This story is very well written and neat, i love his FL character and how she behaves over everything. Her interactions with the other characters also look smooth, great job author! Keep it up![img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    BE STILL MY BEATING HEART
    Realistic · Maryam_Mayo
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Commented

    Nice chapter, the FL has interesting and adorable characteristics, all the situations are also well described. Great job author![img=recommend][img=recommend]

    Ch 1 ALAYAH AS A COOK AT MANSION
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    BE STILL MY BEATING HEART
    Realistic · Maryam_Mayo
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Commented

    its really easy to imagines, well describe~

    She explained to the gatekeeper that she had come for the cook position, and the guard led her inside. As she was walking on the grey-tiled pavement, the building was actually a mansion. The windows of that mansion were huge enough to let in any sunshine, and on one side of the pavement there was a garden and on the other, there was a swimming pool. It seemed like there is a small world unto itself. The most used color was grey, grey building, grey flower pots, and grey outside couch. Near the pool, there was a sizeable dining table with almost twenty grey chairs around it.
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    BE STILL MY BEATING HEART
    Realistic · Maryam_Mayo
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Commented
    "Yes, that's why your scrambled eggs taste so special and delicious," Elin said.
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    BE STILL MY BEATING HEART
    Realistic · Maryam_Mayo
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Posted

    A good story with an interesting plot, you will immediately be interested in reading more when you start reading the opening part. Great job author! Keep it up! [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    Sign in to lord god
    Fantasy · sleepingpeacefully
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Replied to GrandSky

    urwell.. please review my story too^^ the title is "Seven Layers of Hell" thank youu😊😊

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    Heavens' Grimoire: Avatar of Chaos
    Fantasy · GrandSky
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Posted

    This story is fun to read with neat and well written, the characters are also unique and fun to follow. You will know how good this story is even in the early chapters. Great job author! Keep it up![img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    Heavens' Grimoire: Avatar of Chaos
    Fantasy · GrandSky
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Commented

    thats a good start, fun to read[img=recommend][img=recommend]

    Ch 1 Beginnings
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    Heavens' Grimoire: Avatar of Chaos
    Fantasy · GrandSky
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Commented

    chill man

    "I know, I know...I just think that it would be quite the party when we finally catch that guy. I just can't wait to torture him, gouge his eyes out, and skin him to the bone!" The skinny man said with a sadistic grin, which quickly creeped out the other two.
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    Heavens' Grimoire: Avatar of Chaos
    Fantasy · GrandSky
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Posted

    The narration is very subtle and detailed, I love how the situations are described and it makes me feel like I'm in there too. This is a great opening and wanna make you read more chapter! Great job author! Keep it up![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Posted

    The opening in blurb already so cool! I like the atmosphere built into the story, how a character is portrayed well and you can imagine the situation properly. This is a great story! Nice job author! I can't wait for the next chapters! Keep it up![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    .............n
    Fantasy · _DarkDestiny_
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  • Kamelzy1
    Kamelzy11yr
    Posted

    This story is very well written! I love how the situation is portrayed, and the feelings of the main character are also very well narrated! Nice job author! Keep it up![img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    The Rift: Masked Phantom
    Fantasy · Jims_Rid
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