Comments of chapter undefined of Queen Of Slaves

This is a very long chapter

Felling bad for Kim Shik🥺🥺😯.. hope he gonna be fine.. Also the chapters are way tooo big.... Author u should decrease the lenth of the chapters and increase the dialogues or else it will become kinda boring day by day....

Kim seems like a very strong and just person

the chapter was good in overall however I felt some sentences were being repeated over and over again. i know it's to bring out the tension but even so, that's not how people usually talk/think

Writing about fighting scene is challenging ... keep it up 😊

The writing style its fine, but i think its too long chapter. You should to cut that for a bit, so it can more enjoyable to read. Keep it up author!

A really well written chapter. The emotions were described nicely

it's really interesting chapter

This is too long of a chapter, author you should have cut it at the flashback.

I ship him already, but can you make it shorter? I keep on reading the same sentence over and over 😂😂

Pretty great and interesting descriptions, tho the chapters could be shorter, I didn't feel bored for even a second 😅

poor Kim I feel bad for him..

Very creative Writing !! poor Kim shik, I really feel bad for him, It breaks my heart, You have written The Best emotional scenes.. Looking forward for more.

poor Kim

so sad

I am also writing a suspense love story so plz take a look and give me a review😇.. "I am blind but my love is not"

Mesmerizing beginning😍but sad for Kim Shik and his daughter. The Nature and Complexion of Kim Shik occur tremendously😋.

There are some paragraphs that got cut down and I think you should try to fix that. Since it's my first time reading, so I'll try to adjust with the characters names because I can easily get confused😅

So satisfying.. Gonna keep reading.. Best luck for author..👍