Felling bad for Kim Shik🥺🥺😯.. hope he gonna be fine..
Also the chapters are way tooo big.... Author u should decrease the lenth of the chapters and increase the dialogues or else it will become kinda boring day by day....
the chapter was good in overall however I felt some sentences were being repeated over and over again. i know it's to bring out the tension but even so, that's not how people usually talk/think
I'm going to be honest. The chapter is long and the story was kind of hard to follow. Which makes it kind of dull and difficult to read at times. But the description of the characters were good. And Kim's family saddened by the lost of a loved one is very relatable.
Very creative Writing !! poor Kim shik, I really feel bad for him, It breaks my heart, You have written The Best emotional scenes.. Looking forward for more.
There are some paragraphs that got cut down and I think you should try to fix that. Since it's my first time reading, so I'll try to adjust with the characters names because I can easily get confused😅