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Comments of chapter undefined of Is it Wrong that I Woke Up in Danmachi as the Main Character?

Mihayli
MihayliLv11Mihayli

I swear people that write in first person treats "I" like it's their religion

Devast
DevastLv4Devast

The dialogue seems too contrived, plus no sane person would give a nickname to a literal goddess he's just met

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WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

is there a particular reason why you deleted your story previously and started again on another profile Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Reisgem
ReisgemLv13Reisgem

not siding with dude who copied you, but just out of sheer curiosity, you can even sue him for it in law perspective? since you too don't have the copyright of danmachi and don't seems have (at last this ch) any OC you can say it your own.

armando_escalante
armando_escalanteLv2armando_escalante

It feels weird that I call her tĂ­a instead of hestia

Shuten
ShutenLv13Shuten

isint it Bell Cranel and not Bell Kranel

daoistxuanlong
daoistxuanlongLv13daoistxuanlong

I have a question it's more of a question of intelligence of the mc since when is a two syllable name/word a long word how lax you god to be

Daoist96wHQb
Daoist96wHQbLv1Daoist96wHQb

there's already so many problem and weird changes in just one chapter... 😒

Nepsoul_Deadly
Nepsoul_DeadlyLv1Nepsoul_Deadly

Bell cranel not k kranel kraken.

Beliel
BelielLv2Beliel

Hello. The title and the chosen cover are so cool but the chapter lacked that creativity that caught my attention and invited me to read the story. Anyway thanks for the chapter.

AcidFlame
AcidFlameLv5AcidFlame

Died from cringe, sorry not for me...

Reisgem
ReisgemLv13Reisgem

lol, if u have a plan and think it will works go for us, tell us when u get it finished not that I plan instead since writing it's not for me so would be useless but will be a delightful piece of story to laugh

DefinitelyNotACat
DefinitelyNotACatLv3DefinitelyNotACat

is ths a harem? als thx for chappy

Darnelljoe
DarnelljoeLv14Darnelljoe

Tia means aunt in Spanish.

Alef_Biersack
Alef_BiersackLv2Alef_Biersack

Making a story like danmachi and DXD without a harem is even more ridiculous with SI, I know it's fanfic but it's unreasonable, I'm glad I took a look at the reviews if it wouldn't be a waste of time, good luck with your story.

AzureFluteFan2
AzureFluteFan2Lv4AzureFluteFan2

Hestia is a long name? My guy it’s only 6 letters.

topak
topakLv14topak

1st chapter meh

HalfazHipocrite
HalfazHipocriteLv3HalfazHipocrite

As your a soon to be lawyer, and experience is an expensive thing to acquire at first… Stepping stones that present themselves are a beautiful thing. So aquire a glove and throw down your challenge. Compared to the absolute B.S. amount of work you’ll have to do as a newbie joining a firm… On a different note, interesting story so far. May your opponents choke, and your clients be wealthy AND innocent(highly unlikely I know.)

Gerier
GerierLv4Gerier

NomadicWaffle
NomadicWaffleLv13NomadicWaffle

Readin, another VainGlory FF, is good from my inspection

SCP_UnKnown
SCP_UnKnownLv13SCP_UnKnown

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