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  • Devast
    Devast5mth
    Commented

    Jesus Christ, all this just to force a meaningless romance? I'm dropping this story, goodbye

    Ch 214 Bella's Story
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    Martial Online.
    Fantasy · Alekzi
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  • Devast
    Devast5mth
    Commented

    So far it has not been mentioned whether everyone has the system or just the MC, this should have been clarified in the first chapters

    Ch 27 Archery
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    Infinite Paths: The Raging Phoenix
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • Devast
    Devast5mth
    Commented

    All this unnecessary persecution and psychopathy on the part of the students has become very annoying, I hope this ends soon because I'm about to abandon the story

    Ch 102 Chapter 25.4 - Joint Dungeon
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    Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
    Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
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  • Devast
    Devast5mth
    Commented

    The math is wrong again. The MC started with 10 troop slots at level 1 and had 250 troop slots at level 6, an increase of 48 slots per level, but when going up to level 7 he had 300 troop slots, an increase of 50 instead of 48. This is getting annoying, in basically every chapter there was a math error

    Ch 7 Secure a Base
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    Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • Devast
    Devast5mth
    Commented

    He said he would buy 8 soldiers, but he bought 6 and then it is said that he bought 4 soldiers

    Ch 5 The Fight
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    Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • Devast
    Devast5mth
    Commented

    The driving skill level is wrong, in the previous chapter it was at level 2 now it is at level 1

    Ch 3 The Military System
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    Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • Devast
    Devast6mth
    Commented

    Jesus, did Jesse also hit his head along with his shoulder? This is extremely stupid and shameful

    Ch 67 Zahhak
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    Martial Online.
    Fantasy · Alekzi
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  • Devast
    Devast6mth
    Commented

    Jesus, it's only the first chapter and there's already a voluptuous girl blushing? I'm stopping here

    Ch 1 Transmigration (1)
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    Level Up in Martial World
    Eastern · Aurelius_Imperator
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  • Devast
    Devast6mth
    Commented

    "When Caecus raised his head at the sound of the beast" What?

    Ch 7 Chapter 7: In The Eyes Of All (2)
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    The New World Player
    Fantasy · shadw
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  • Devast
    Devast6mth
    Commented

    Jesus, every time I see a protagonist start shouting the names of techniques or go crazy because of a random person, it makes me want to drop the story right away

    Ch 11 Aizel vs Larisa (part-2)
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    The Moonlight Swordsman
    Fantasy · Mahaksh
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  • Devast
    Devast6mth
    Commented

    It would be interesting if he used pistols and a scythe

    Ch 23 Chapter 5.3 - Following Day
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    Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
    Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
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  • Devast
    Devast6mth
    Commented

    Got some inspiration from Bloodborne, huh? I like that

    Ch 11 Chapter 2.4 - Beginning
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    Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
    Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
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  • Devast
    Devast6mth
    Commented

    This level of bullying is VERY forced, no one would act like this unless they were mentally unstable

    Ch 6 Chapter 1.3 - Eclipse of Destiny
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    Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
    Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
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  • Devast
    Devast7mth
    Commented

    Jesus, the grammar is simply painful to read. I hope it improves in the next chapter

    Ch 5 5. Walker’s System
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    Master of none
    Fantasy · 1King_Rep1
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  • Devast
    Devast7mth
    Commented

    Normally, I would have dropped the story at this point, given the recent plot developments. However, considering that the character is Gilgamesh, it's actually expected that something like this would happen soon. Good job!

    Ch 10 Overwhelming Power
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    Defying Divinity
    Anime & Comics · SrCuervo
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  • Devast
    Devast7mth
    Replied to AzathothGD

    Unless the protagonist is a psychopath, this is impossible

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: Escape [Part 2]
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    Shadow Monarch in Tensura
    Anime & Comics · TheRandomMe
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  • Devast
    Devast7mth
    Commented

    Well, that was a pretty stupid chapter, but let's see how it goes

    Ch 4 Chapter 4
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    Reborn in JJK as a Gojo
    Anime & Comics · Conceptual_Entity
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  • Devast
    Devast9mth
    Commented

    Did he really think he could learn magic in one day? It takes humans longer than that to learn how to hold a fork, let alone learn magic

    Ch 7 Inspiration
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    I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy
    Fantasy · WhiteNightingale
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  • Devast
    Devast10mth
    Commented

    Without emotion? Are you telling me that an untrained and inexperienced teenager maintained an expressionless face the first time he killed another human being? And on top of that, multiple humans?

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: Escape [Part 2]
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    Shadow Monarch in Tensura
    Anime & Comics · TheRandomMe
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  • Devast
    Devast10mth
    Commented

    What a forced plot, Jesus

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Escape [Part 1]
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    Shadow Monarch in Tensura
    Anime & Comics · TheRandomMe
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