It will work as an artifact

I'm starting to read and it has an inconsistency with what Whitebeard . He wouldn't stay in Konoha. He's a pirate. What he also likes is adventure and exploration. Being in a new world, I can't imagine him staying more than a week. There, it's a pirate???

has que sea como Hyperion

excelente progreso de la historia me encanta 🤩🤩🤩👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻

friend how old was the mc was he an adult before he died because if he doesn't behave as such then he should already know what reality is like and not a movie he would have to go to subdue an abomination if he decided to fight and not joke because lives are at stake and he shouldn't try to reason with the Hulk because he's dangerous too.

It does not make sense friend to be able to make 8 clones they need a lot of chakra also in the series when Kakashi was young he could only make one clone because of his receipts also multi shadow clone jutsu is a kijutsu he could not be within Kakashi's reach because of his danger if not that jutsu it would not be on the forbidden scroll

excellent friend I like the mechanics keep it up 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻😎😎😎🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

nice 🔥🔥😎😎🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥷🥷🥷🥷💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

excellent interpreting the fights as if it were an anime I think it's great 💪🏻💪🏻😎🔥🔥

está comenzando bien pero hubieras cambiado la prueba que sea diferente no todos los jounin son iguales...pero estuvo bien

It feels weird that I call her tía instead of hestia

you would have put his awakening equal to that of janemba splitting space

you should have given him a strength quirk, not as much but enough to complement the other

I don't understand, you hadn't said that his body improved, you didn't have more physical power, how could he jump so high before, he should be physically stronger than the average adult and even if he had no experience, he should have gained before, you should modify the character's power scale well so that one don't miss