Raidyourpussy123
thanks.. i wish you would create same type of story for any other anime too.. this is also great... don't get me wrong
Just a little advice : it is necessary to separate a large paragraph into a small paragraph to simplify and read the chapter easily.
Interesing
This whole chapter could be a One-Shot and be done đ¤Ł
Misae Nohara
If every chapter represents one character then add more characters from mother anime to make it a multiverse traveling ff
It's good but i don't like when he explain the the whole thing in chapter, it's plain
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Thanks for the chapter and what universe is this?
Don't forget about NANAKO ...
thanks for the really great chapter
Grammer needs a little work, but the story telling and use of vocabulary is very good.
The characters
seria bueno agregar el universo de Doraemon
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