webnovel
avatar

Comments of chapter undefined of Shin chan

Kharn_the_sussy
Kharn_the_sussyLv1Kharn_the_sussy

Got_Skill_Creation
Got_Skill_CreationLv4Got_Skill_Creation

thanks.. i wish you would create same type of story for any other anime too.. this is also great... don't get me wrong

Dark_Crow_Dao
Dark_Crow_DaoLv13Dark_Crow_Dao

Just a little advice : it is necessary to separate a large paragraph into a small paragraph to simplify and read the chapter easily.

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

Interesing

TheLonelyGod
TheLonelyGodLv13TheLonelyGod

This whole chapter could be a One-Shot and be done 🤣

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

Misae Nohara

AEGIR123
AEGIR123Lv4AEGIR123

NovelMonster
NovelMonsterLv13NovelMonster

RottenEmp
RottenEmpLv3RottenEmp

_UnknownEntity0_
_UnknownEntity0_Lv13_UnknownEntity0_

If every chapter represents one character then add more characters from mother anime to make it a multiverse traveling ff

Croissance
CroissanceLv4Croissance

It's good but i don't like when he explain the the whole thing in chapter, it's plain

Celestial_Chaos24
Celestial_Chaos24Lv4Celestial_Chaos24

...

Lvec
LvecLv4Lvec

Thanks for the chapter and what universe is this?

Eclipse_Gate_Gene
Eclipse_Gate_GeneLv4Eclipse_Gate_Gene

Don't forget about NANAKO ...

DRACONIAN619
DRACONIAN619Lv13DRACONIAN619

thanks for the really great chapter

umbradjinn
umbradjinnLv13umbradjinn

Grammer needs a little work, but the story telling and use of vocabulary is very good.

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

Misae Nohara

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

The characters

Hayate_Ayasaki_
Hayate_Ayasaki_Lv3Hayate_Ayasaki_

seria bueno agregar el universo de Doraemon

Michael_Degala_1808
Michael_Degala_1808Lv4Michael_Degala_1808

👍