Dark_Crow_Dao
I hate SIMP / BETA MC, Brainless / Naive / Arrogant MC without having a real power. I like OP MC, Clever / Confident / Cunning MC, SIGMA / ALPHA MC (not like the others MC who only think with their D)
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the story and concept is interesting, but bad execution, we follow the same path as One Piece with the MC (Luffy), and even if he had enough time to become powerful since he has been training since he was 7 years old with a system and a powerful master but always remains weak and the worst is that he had the opportunity to learn HAKI but he did not want to learn it because it is very boring and he wanted to train techniques that are useless (he gets beaten up by the admirals), honestly i am very disappointed, and now all the crew becomes girls (gender bender), I had high expectations but it's just another Fan Fic that follows the whole process of the manga.
Nice Chapter, and yes i see that there is indeed an improvement in writing but i think that sometimes the development of the women he chooses is missing, so you can look into this part of development ( i understand that sins nature affect it, but with a little work, it should become better ), i would also like to thank you for your work and the mass release which i appreciate very much and i will continue to support you. Good luck Sicko.
A good novel with a clever, manipulative MC who does what he wants while controlling his emotions well and becoming powerful over time. The author did a good job with world building, characters but slow paced ( kinda slow imo ) For the romance the MC has his Harem and we have Lemon scenes which are really hot.