susuke_uchiwa
dont worry as author do what you like write whatever you want correct or wrong good or bad at the end of day you cant please everyone. because there is nothing perfect in this world , everyone has flaw no matter how good author is , there will always be that someone that doesnt like it. ignore whatever you see and be leader not being lead be someone. because every author that being lead be someone drop the fanfic because they dont like being told what to do and what not to do. and even if you did what they want from you they will still create more problem
Sorry but I cringed so much... First, you said he got all of aizen power and experience and somehow he still act like a virgin around women. And then he goes traveling and somehow end up in "clearly" akeno house, yea right... I swear to god if you make him indebted to them so you can have an excuse to help Rias, I'm going to be so disappointed.