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story has a lot of potential hope it continues
very good story looking forward to the next part of the story keep up the amazing work ,..............,............................,............
It's cool to see a new out look on the mc the only thing I would ask is for the story passing to slow down a bit and ad a little more to the word around the mc..but in a hole good story keep going