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" Hey Uta, let's make a pinky promise. When we're out there making our dreams come true, let's meet up and reunite. You alright with that? " Luffy asked. Uta looked at him and nodded determinedly.- TaKa1yrCommented
if the MC already outmatched by one of the weakest dragons in dxd then he is done for... all maou are way stronger then her,old devil faction, Kaos brigade, high tier fallen angels and more...( all of them are monitoring everything that is happening in the world, I would say someone MC that's hosting arguably the strongest sacred gear is a top priority...) on top of that he is going to fight raiser which going to make him even more in danger and have be under the 'control' of some faction to survive...
Ch 11 10 - TaKa1yrCommented
just to suffer...
'Why am I here…' - TaKa1yrReplied to xGhillie
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(You abandoned soul come and be my servant. I'm giving you the chance to see a completely different world. Come and serve me, Esdeath) - TaKa1yrCommented
I like your writing... but i will never feel satisfied about the outcome when there are so many ways for the MC to get stronger. all I got to say is that 'for someone who's terrified of dying he sure like to limit his options' that's why reading this feels so forced. and the worse thing is that issei felt stronger than this while having less time than than this MC.
This book has been deleted. - TaKa1yrCommented
why is no one talking about low level? this why I hate time skips.. MC level up 25 levels in few days. time skip 6 months gains only 25 more. bro if he only get "1" level a day he would be almost 200.. and don't tell me that it becomes harder to level.. yes the exp per level increase, but so does the exp per NPC kill too!
Ch 5 Plot Is About to Begin, First (R-18) - TaKa1yrCommented
6 months ... only few levels. this is why I hate time skips.
Level 69 - TaKa1yrCommentedCh 4 CHAPTER 4
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... you basically made him very weak to mental attack is draig is able to look at his memories. at least make him able to do the same, this make him look so weak to someone h who has those resistances...
Of course, meanwhile, Ddraig was looking at my memories, and of course I was aware of that, but I didn't care. - TaKa1yrCommented
Sorry but I cringed so much... First, you said he got all of aizen power and experience and somehow he still act like a virgin around women. And then he goes traveling and somehow end up in "clearly" akeno house, yea right... I swear to god if you make him indebted to them so you can have an excuse to help Rias, I'm going to be so disappointed.
Ch 11 chapter 10 journey to the west - TaKa1yrCommentedCh 19 Combat Class - end(Short chap)
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Doesn't he need to cure his curse?? Then any world that can cure that should be his priority if we think from the MC point of view... Start with start with cultivation (guaranteed that it will remove it because cultivation remove anything negative from the body.l, qi is vastly overpowered then demon slayers powers) or some world that has an easy to get immortality( there are lot) He can cure it easily this way or with his current plan without unnecessary cringey drama. Something you never do in any 'action' story is nerfing the MC.
Ch 8 Power Scaling - TaKa2yrCommented
I really hate this cliche where the family seal the MC power to protect him... And then they leave alone and on top of that they remove the barrier around the house??wtf! And don't tell me "but the MC is strong!" BS, to his 'family' he is a normal guy without any power (because hey!! Let's seal his power instead of training him) while knowing what exactly the enemies they have. + I really hope that the MC leave and never come back just to see their reaction when they come back home. You could say it's edgy but it's better then acting like everything they did is normal.
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