Comments of chapter undefined of My throne

Ryoko turning into *something* was my favourite portion in this chapter. I wish you could have extended the sequence a little longer and the whole thing about Yuto *helping* her turn normal, with more clarity.

It was very interesting that I did not know when I got to the ending of this chapter. So Ryoko is possessed but why did her mother want her to hide the truth. I guess the truth will reveal itself with time.

Typing up your content on a grammar checking app like Grammarly would work wonders :) It'd also help to be a bit more descriptive - semi-script format could work for more comedic works, but for something serious and dramatic, you'd need to provide appropriate amounts of description to draw readers in.

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Desdemona is really annoying here, and Axel is a pushover. Their personalities were written really well here. I also like the scenes unfolding in this chapter. The typos were just making me a bit confused about what's happening with who. If they were intentional though, I apologize. I'm probably just not used to the style😅

I am so lost on who is who anymore. Where did the "not Axel" Axel from last chapter go? Why is the actual Axel so easy to distract. A whole person disappared and you just wanna dance with a lady, how shameless. I suppose ryoko is possessed now

Ryoko is possessed, isn't she?

Nice chapter

tftc