Hm this story was actually better than I expected! At first when I read synopsis I thought it would be a little boring but the first chapter was actually really intriguing and creepy.. it gave me chills and I loved it! Still I think that you should rewrite the synopsis do you'll attract more readers. Definitely gonna add it in my library

Omg the story seems really nice... I still think that FL mother is kind of scary tho 😕

shtrige 😭😭

U la la this seems as a typical bad boy and good girl romance I like your writing style and I think that FL with help ML to recover from his old traumas I hope so. I'm a bit surprised why so little views but don't worry I think it will blow up someday! BTW title is really nice it suits cover to

Thank you ✨

Well people could use her dark side for their own benefits and they would be scared from her so it's better if she hides it

I just like a lot Japanese culture this is why I use a lot Japanese names. As for Ryoko I won't spoil her don't worry if MC doesn't struggle a bit where is the fun part :)

Nope I just like japanese culture a lot ✨

Girl why didn't I thought that before 😣

I'm sorry that your friend used your phobia as advantage 😣. I also used to have that fear but somehow as a introvert I'm used to be alone so I don't have that phobia anymore 🙂

You're right they are intentional! I'm so happy that someone is understanding my writing style cause it can be a little confusing but I think it makes story more interesting 😅

Her mood switches because of her other personality or her dark side Toshiba cause she still can't fully control her emotions and powers

You're right! Toshiba is Ryoko's other personality and he shows up when she's really emotional this is why he showed up in those moments

Brothers are always annoying 😂😂

I would say yes and no. Inside her lives a demon and when Ryoko is scared, mad or really nervous he takes the control of her body

The fake Axel was actually Toshiba Ryoko's dark side. He was masked as Axel to trick her but Ryoko found out who he really was.

Thank you 😊 Actually my writing style isn't typical webnovel writing style this is why so many people are confused about it 😅

Ryoko isn't fully possessed she has her dark side which is a evil demon ( Toshiba) as a kind of Shinigami. Ryoko can control him but sometimes she loses the control and her dark side possessed her

Actually it was Yuto who was telling Ryoko to wake up cause she fainted. Ryoko was still dizzy and she couldn't really hear him well so you're right.. it was some kind of whispers 😅

Sorry it was a gramatical mistake Yuto and Edgar are the same person