Comments of chapter undefined of My throne

Very interesting, I like Ryoko, she is talented even if she doesn't know her gift yet but it doesn't make her less. It was also funny, I want to see how the competition goes. I want to see how COUNTDOWN power will be useful.

Are YUTO and EDGAR same man??? It is confusing me a little bit😅😅.. But the way they met was awesome and hope they don't have to fight eachother in the competition 🥺🥺🥺(which l know it might be😂)

well, the first two chapters were ok but.... I can't say much about your book with only 2 chapters so I'll wait until some more comes out

Good chapter

So far so good, I'm waiting for more to come in next Chapters.

The formatting needs fixing, but solid chapter miss :)

some grammatical mistakes

I like the world-building here, particularly the magical abilities. I think there were some missing words or articles that confused me a little about what's happening. Not sure if it's grammatical or just typographical. I also got a bit confused with the hyphens at the beginning, but I guess it was whispers (or not? let me know)

loving your book dear......eager to know more..

Love this chapter

great cliffhanger 🔪

I like it so far.

tftc

Thanks for the chapter...