Comments of chapter undefined of [Nightmare]

really liked the first ch

That's one impressive first chapter. I was skeptical of the summary about 80% of reader's drop because some character died but I don't mind it one bit it if that character isn't close to mc, heck I even want mc to go on a rampage and kill anyone that stood I his way. Anyway the writing and execution is very promising that I'll definitely stick for a while.

Smart (but in a different sense) MC ☑️

Original

Ok I like the premise and the idea, I also understand and support most points our MC made but you don't need to bash everything and be bitter about everything in isekai. I'm not saying this is wrong I'm just saying that the mindset MC went in with is wrong

Wow, mc is kind of annoying, I mean I get his point, but what can he do, he should just go with the flow till e can decide his own fate

helix the cinic cool guy ;D

Yo Margrave my friend. Was scrolling for something to read when I saw one of your novels. The concept for this one looks really interesting. I'm excited to try it out.

i understand ,but what s his problem, he just pointed out stuff ,he didn't say what is his problem gaining magic power

interesting

A nice start, thanks for the chapter

I like how it's starting. Interesting 🤔

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

awsm chapter i really liked it.