VeganMaster
First off, great chapter! I really enjoyed this one! I mean everything really fit in, form Garp blabbing anything he knew about armament haki, to needing to learn at least 2 rokushiki techniques become an actual rear admiral. I mean it all really fit in. However, (sorry if I’m annoying you with these questions), shouldn’t there be an interview for Enel? To check his background, and his psyche? But, since Akainu managed to enter the marines, I doubt they do a psyche check, lol. Plus, I always imagined Sengoku to be the cautious type, you know? The type who would be suspicious of Enel’s sudden emergence, and would question Enel extensively before recruiting him to the marines? But again, since Sengoku was with Garp, and the marines are lacking powerful new recruits, I guess all that precaution went away. Anyway, these are my question. Hope you answer them! And again, really loved this chapter! Hope you continue this story!
Yo, maybe at least make him have a reasonable reason of his departure like celestial dogs somehow taking fancy of him as a temporary bodyguard and ordered him to do something outrageously bad only for him to deny and spout some real "justice" so that Garp and Sengoku would at least look at him in a tolerating light even if they have to full on increase his bounty to the top
To think I almost didn't notice this new VeganMaster fic! Your work is always gold so naturally I have to follow this. Will also try my hand at some covers. Not that there's anything wrong with the current one, mind. Just felt like playing around with Vegan covers for old times sake. :) I narrowed myself down to four. Not 100% sure if the title will be easily legible when shrunk down to library size but I can always bump it up afterwards if required, assuming any catch your fancy. Cover1:
I saw some people saying that he should stay in marine but that's literally impossible, His goal is to find out about the void century and that's like no.1 of the list of things the world government don't want to any1 to find out. On another note, How far does the knowledge of mc regarding the world of one peice go? Does he know luffy's true devil fruit?
after mc leaves the marines he has to strengthen his influence so u could have him ally with people whose goals align with his for example: -boa hancock, gild teroso...(from film gold) both have a grudge against the celestial dragons since one was a slave themselves and other lost his lover to them. -big news morgan: he basically controls the news around the world and only cares about spreading shocking but truthful news. -kings of certain countries allied with the WG but were harmed by it like alabasta,dressrosa... because though weak the hold a lot of political power especially alabasta. -neo navy led by zephyr since he probably knows a lot of marine and world government secrets or secret. this simply a suggestion that hopefully inspires u author. Finally keep up the good work.