Thanks for the chapter. Can anyone recommend some other Big Mum fanfictions?

don't forget the gold in Skypiea.

i feel like Victor's goal is not necessarily to turn Tarly to their side, considering how stubborn he is, but to cause a rift between him and Tyrells, with all the benefits he gained and the private meeting most people will doubt if he has a secret deal with Victor.

idk much about negotiating, but it feels like victor gave too much, i mean he has to do all the work while the dornish sit back and get the benefits .Plus you said he doesn't want to contend with the nobles of Westeros yet here he is seeking a piece of land as an outsider. Great story though, thanks for the chapter.

I wasn't aware of that information thank you. but my point is that should he want to gain some benefit from Westeros(especially during the chaos caused by the mad king) or Essos there will be some form of retaliation,since the interests are already split, so if he can use the council to make moves in the name of Lys as whole, the other noble houses will share both the gains as well as the pressure. Most importantly this could lower the chance of outsiders causing internal friction within Lys itself. I hope you continue with the great story dear author.

author i think the protagonist should try and find a way to unite the interests of the major nobles of Lys, even if he is unwilling to be king he could work on a council of sorts, with the ultimate goal of showing a united front to outsiders, after all house Di Natale is still too small compared to the major nobles of Westeros. Thank you for the chapter.

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Author make both Ace and Sabo part of his crew, they both have enough potential, same thing with Law . Thanks for the chapter.

they can secretly assassinate him, Garp can't babysit him all the time, so be needs to hide his strength in case they try something cheeky on him.

smoker better start hiding part of his strength, being low key until he is strong enough is the best path. thanks for the chapter.

I think it's interesting as long as it is on the mc's side .

I hope this isn't a fix it fix where the protagonist will jump into irrationally into every problem just because they think they are doing the right thing, and if it is at least make sure he is strong enough to deal with the consequences without relying on plot armor.

if the WG finds out he did so they will not let him go.

thanks for the chapter BTW.

if he can't control or at least communicate with whatever comes out of the egg he better use it for one of his rituals as an ingredient, no point in having a cool pet that is more trouble then they are help.

I hope Dumbledore will take some actions to counter Voldemort, because if things keep going the way they are I see no way the Mc can to overtake him.

the best way this can go in my opinion is if the Mc reveals to Dumbledore that voidi is getting stronger, like an exact estimate, since he probably knows already. Let the two greatest wizards of the century deal with each other until he is strong enough to backstab whoever is winning since both are a major threat to him anyways

the celestial dragons have no reason to go to Marineford, so their families won't have any intersection with them, the elders on the other hand have no reason to scheme against most marine since they are mostly Canon fodder to them. not to mention the world government does not seem to have absolute control over the navy .

can you give the link to the raws?

unfortunately it's a harem story