GMSJakers
Another great chapter! I’m really liking the narration specifically, it’s been pretty specific and has made these chapters super smooth to read so far
Sometimes, your use of 'em dash', those —, is a little offsetting sometimes, you can use them much better to further empathise the narcissistic comments Connor makes about his environment or people around him
Are they spies?
he's leading them straight to his house!
thanks for the chapter. [img=recommend] [img=update]
what should I say ?.this chapter is really amazing author.
no time to breathe...excellent work.
This was a good chapter. I love the way you left a cliffhanger. of course, I am going to read on. I need to know if they followed him home.
Interesting plot🥰🥰🥰
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
