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Welcome to my world of imagination. Let stories be your refuge as adventures unfold on this literary journey together.Here my other account Rara_Jasmin
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Thank you for your honest review about my story,Author
you also got it perfectly ,even better than me.
thankzz author
I'm delighted to hear that you used my book for reading. It's wonderful to know. Your thoughts about my book are truly valuable in helping me improve my writing skills. Could you also provide an honest review of my book 'Silver Serenade'? It would be greatly appreciated and would assist me in making improvements.
thankzz author.
thankyou for your support.Recently, I've been using a different account due to some issues with this one. I've uploaded a new story called 'Silver Serenade' on the other account, and I would appreciate it if you could take a look when you have some spare time. I plan to continue writing this story. I apologize for the extended wait.
This chapter is truly captivating, author. Please keep writing, as I'm thoroughly enjoying the story. To be honest, it feels a bit shorter chapter, but that's just my impression, and it doesn't detract from the story's quality. The pacing might be different, but it's maintaining the story's intrigue, and I'm eager to see where it leads.
I'm currently planning to update it, but my schedule is quite packed due to exams and other responsibilities. At times, I've wondered if anyone reads my book to the very end of this chapter, which has caused a slight dip in my motivation. Nevertheless, I'm determined to make improvements and more chapters . Thank you for taking the time to read it.
I can see that you are establishing a strong backdrop in this chapter
This chapter is filled with various events in different places, much like watching a movie. Your writing skill has notably improved, author.
The beginning of this story is indeed captivating ,author.
I recently delved into this novel, and I must say, it's a captivating journey. While I did notice some minor grammar errors in the initial chapters, they didn't deter me from being immersed in the story. As the plot unfolded, I found myself pondering the intriguing question of why the king doesn't recognize his wife. It's a puzzling element that adds depth to the narrative, leaving me curious about what secrets might be unveiled.I appreciate the author's ability to keep me engaged and eager to uncover the mysteries within the story. Sometimes, minor imperfections can be overlooked when the narrative is compelling, and this novel certainly has that quality. I'm excited to see how the story progresses and trust that there's a reason for all these intricacies. Best of luck to the author; I look forward to reading more!"