A simple, but effectif beginning.
The author doesn't spend 45 lignes describing useless things that we'll all have forgoten about in 10 minutes and gets straight to the point.
Good first chaper, just need to know what's next.
Good for him. I can definitly relate to the main character I am the definition of introvert, awkward, and was bullied in middle school. Bad. It's always fun to her zszbout something like this happening. Good job so far.
hmm how do I say this the grammar feels good but a bit bad at some places like when reading a manga there are amazing panels and so so panels in the same chap (nice chap tho)
