Comments of chapter undefined of Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage

I mean it’s rather inconsistent, the first thing you would probably do if you found a child of unparalleled talent is provide him with protection. Why was the first thing that came to mind is him running away? It just doesn’t make sense. Some BS.

Reasoning here makes no sense. That's certainly not the first thing you would assume

Alright this is too bad to continue wating time on it. Feels like the project of a high schooler, very bad writing quality's

This novel is the same romanticization of the evil/dark mc where everyone seems to hate them and they eventually conclude that it is their right to hate the world too. That isn’t bad by itself, but when written like this with virtually no care, it is the kind of stuff that will get everyone sick of a popular genre until some (actually good and original) author starts a new trend and almost everyone else decides to plagiarize their work to some extent. It’s happened with the tower/dungeon genre, the necromancer, the actually evil mc, and many others. This one seems like evil mc/necromancer though it doesn’t do it well. Anyways, I hope your writing gets better Demonic angel.

dropped. forcing plot way to hard. take a moment to think things through from a logical perspective in the future

These guys are really dumb….

so many plots holes

nice chapter

dropped. mc doesn't use brain cells

The amount of foreshadowing, flags and irony....

Man I just can't swallow this 😅