thx for the heads up

I really think you should try not to mix in Kane chronicles or magnus chase as everything i have read that has done that has been confusing or irrelevant and boring. sticking to the Greek side and I guess Roman is what I feel is best

going so hard into the gamer stuff is slowly ruining the story. it feels like its all about the gamer and it takes away from the actual story. normally people use the gamer as a way to power scale the character upwards. I would recommend to keep the skills he can get and that system but pull back on the id creates and having to hide his powers. the gamer stuff is just getting in the way now. in all honesty all his powers and weapons he got should have correlated to posiedon so he didn't have to hide anything

sitting in a tent in any remotely hot place during the day is absolute torture. dudes cooking himselt

all these dungeon chapters are boring. your killing your own story. sometimes its better to skip over things

for efficiency in mana at force force levels it would just be easier to have air magic and make it so none can breath? or water magic and bloodbend. scaling to fire force levels is stupid. if dude is gonna freeze the universe then he probably has enough mana to kill anyone with another element

after he wakes up please reintroduce him into the underworld fast. I don't want to see another keeping identity hidden plot. just make him beat up riser in a rating game or smthing

starts off good but devolves into standard fantasy trash. MC goes on a adventure and spends 10 chapters in a dungeon. then it's all about the guild. there is no story just same old same old filler.

I'm out. literally destorying everything good about jjk

I agree with what I saw someone else d say. way to much crossover. maybe focus on dxd and one other for a while and then swap out one after quite a while. not everyone knows every crossover here and with it happening so fast it is super confusing

3 heavenly restrictions and not special grade. jeez you crazy

I don't like this big bad guy. it just feels kinda ughh

just kill Issei. you are neutering your own story. no one is gonna stick around if your gonna make every pay 100s of chapters away.

Its another low-key hiding his power MC. writing is quite good but story is pretty mid. it's just a average fine to read but easily forgotten. MC has no real impact moments. the story would be better if based around classes golden boy. fine to read not worth it to spend coins. cheers

this chapter had alot of repetition just in different words. felt like it should be half the length. but still enjoying it

way to much sap. tone it down a bit. maybe have him get injured and not care about life enough to go to the hospital or something. you pushed a bit far into the territory of pity baiting

write a description that actually informs of a story. with so many other storys to choose people like to look at the description to see what type of story it is and if it interests them. you just wrote a poem

sounds like a power rangers catch phrase

its starts off amazing, and then at like chapter 40 the author decided to destory everything good about the story and never take any feedback. I have never seen a story go from so good to so bad before. I honestly belive someone else took over the authors account. don't read, save your self the utter frustration

yeah dropped. author has no clue what they are doing