Comments of chapter undefined of Aden Strong: Avatar In DC

That was what I expected from their meeting, since the Presence takes on the form of an old gentleman I figured he would behave like one and want too hear Aden's story.

It's a nice chapter and it has a chill pace. Great job auther(and I don't mean that sarcastically) you cut the tense mood and gave some character development.

Rather than system making the dimension inaccessible, its more logical to have it this way. Nice going author!!!

It's amusing that the avatar state had to be forcibly calmed down before it thought things threw and didn't attack god or yell at them. Glad it worked out in an overall positive way. He also completed his quest so next chapter we'll see what new ability he gets.

this is good but can you maybe get the endless in this now after all Aden met the Presence which is the most powerful being in dc cause I want him to meet The Sandman and Death, Fate and maybe even desire for further growth and a friendship between them besides desire and I'm talking about the tv show version cause comics are little more dangerous

everyone is saying he can’t access holy fire, but he still can he just needs holy water and it won’t actually be his, the light will flow through the fire but he controls the fire not the light so to speak its like wires we can’t control electricity but we can guide it

So no more holy fire?

Thanks for this great 👍 chapter.

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.

That was anticlimactic, but it makes sense since DC deity is wishy washy.

Mm... nice.

Bro that is an insane wish to grant! Literaly nothing exept THE PRESENCE can enter! That means the endless cannot touch him! Meaning that while he is in that realm he cannot be touch by death herself!

thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapter :) He could always try and draw power from the source wall :)

The fact there are beings above The Presence is insane. The Writer and the Overmonitor. Not to mention The Presence's equal, The Great Evil Beast.

thanks for the chapter