There's a difference between commenting on something and complaining about it. Especially if you do it continually. The people I was referring were the ones who LITERALLY kept commenting LONG after they said they'd drop. Complaining the WHOLE time. It got annoying after awhile.

Understandable. Hope this helps.

1) I don't know why you're guessing... I literally stated why I felt as I do. But allow me to clarify. I understand that mentally he's older (Though not by a large margin.). Physically, however, he's not much older than the golden trio. So why call others who around the same age "kid"? He's even done it to people his own (Physical.) age. As I said, I find it odd that he keeps doing so. Cringeworthy even. It's as simple as that. 2) Logically speaking... and as more an afterthought than anything else, if I "never passed by that childish phase where you act as if anyone younger than you is a kid in your opinion", then would I not agree with you?

Their BOTH kids. That's my point.

Honestly... not doing well. My dad passed away unexpectedly some months back and it hit me hard. Heck, it hit my whole family hard. I took some time for myself, and I thought I was getting better. I was wrong. I made the decision to undergo therapy. And it was my therapist herself who recommended I not write anything else until I worked through it (Even though I wanted too.). She was worried I might use it as an escape from the reality I faced. I thought she was full of crap, but I did what she asked. Turns out, she wasn't the one that was full of crap. I was. See, I had a lot I needed to work through... way more than I originally thought. It's taken more time than I had hoped, but I am feeling like myself again. I plan to start writing again soon. P.S. The story you referenced is called "Dragon Ball Saga: Conquest". I'm glad you liked it.

Writing Quality: Subpar. I know a lot of it is that the translator can't change the authors story and some things just don't translate well, but the fact remains... it needs work. That's doubly so for the research the author put in. There are a LOT of inaccuracies. Stability of Updates: No problems here. The translator/re-translator is on top of it. Story Development: Look... I don't wanna bash the work put into this Fic, but the story could use a re-write. It starts off as something you would expect out of a Chinese cultivation novel. It doesn't really change overall. That's the simple truth. Character Design: Poor. In most cases, the author doesn't manage to capture the essence of the characters he's trying to portray. World Background: As I mentioned, the research... or rather, the lack thereof for this Fic shows. Read the first five chapters and you'll see what I'm talking about. If not, or if you just don't care either way, then this might just be the novel for you.

Us? Kyle, yeah. Steve, no.

I love a good side story. Thx for the chapter, my dude.

That's some quick acceptance, right there.

He's right.

This should be phrased differently. I would go with something along the lines of, "Start experimenting and using Legilimency on Digby, aiming to infiltrate his mind and reveal his innermost thoughts to me.". When you use the words "pry his head open", it might be taken the wrong way.

shift=sift

storey=story

Also, the last sentence in this paragraph was a run-on sentence. Break it down if you want it to read as intended.

shone=shown

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Wholeheartedly disagree. Way less drama this term.

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Alteration is the one school of magic that could allow a mortal to rival the Divines. I'm looking forward to seeing where this author takes the concept.

Love it.