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Rayodino

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2021-05-27 JoinedGlobal
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino20d
    Commented

    So he’s a slave then

    [Failure: Penalty decided by the system]
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    Sovereign Conjurer: Ultimate Gacha in a Mix Anime World
    Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino2mth
    Commented

    The character interactions don’t feel believable. She just claims unbelievable things and Emma just goes along with it and doesn’t even question it.

    Ch 7 Chapter 7
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    Unique Gamers Travels
    TV · ArtoriaPendragon_
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino2mth
    Commented

    That’s clearly a lie. She just drove there. Does she expect her to believe she got her driving license at home?

    Talia could already see how this was going. It was Emma's councilor's side coming out. "Nope, no one has come to see me, and this is the first time I have left my house in over 7 years"
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    Unique Gamers Travels
    TV · ArtoriaPendragon_
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino2mth
    Commented

    Hope there are some limitations or restrictions otherwise it would make any encounter trivial and boring

    [Powerful Spell - Killing Curse]
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    Unique Gamers Travels
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino3mth
    Commented

    All for the idea, good luck

    Ch 101 An update?
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    My Hero: Quirk Evolution
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino6mth
    Commented

    Public

    So, should he go public with his identity or not? Well, there's a third way too. 
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    HP: The Arcane Thief
    Book&Literature · Snollygoster
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino7mth
    Commented

    The exceeded limits notification came out of nowhere.

    Ch 50 S2E50 - Planning for the Future
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino7mth
    Replied to Rayodino

    I meant *Bruce not Clark

    Ch 30 Chapter 30: Meeting Clark
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    DC: I am Bruce Wayne
    Anime & Comics · God_Doom
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino7mth
    Commented

    Love the chapter. My only suggestion is to slow down on introducing so many main characters this early in Clarks life. At the rate it’s going Clark is going to be childhood friends and enemies with every character of importance.

    Ch 30 Chapter 30: Meeting Clark
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    DC: I am Bruce Wayne
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino8mth
    Commented

    I’m fine with it. Keep up the good work and hope everything works out for you.

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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino8mth
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    Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino8mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 40 S2E40 - Penny the Liver
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino8mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 39 S2E39 - Farmstead
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino8mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino8mth
    Commented

    Weren’t they some big time criminal family? How did 4 gang members manage to kill them all with no resistance?

    Ch 18 Chapter 18: The Night of the Hunt (2)
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    DC: I am Bruce Wayne
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino8mth
    Commented

    Should have at least kept one alive for interrogation

    Within just five seconds of continuous firing, dark red-colored liquid began to leak from the man's ears, eyes, nose, and mouth signifying that whatever limited amount of brain the man had was now slowly leaking out of him like water. Even the glass and mirrors of the car behind him had all cracked under the pulse's devastating effect.
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino8mth
    Replied to Rayodino

    Right now it really like I skipped a bunch of chapters

    Ch 1 Chapter - 1
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    Marvel: The Spider in Endless Sea of Possibilities
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino8mth
    Commented

    I love the concept for your story but I think you started too far ahead. He already has a powerful armour made of end game materials, super advanced technology, his alternate selfs are already among the strongest on Earth despite being the same age(I think). Would have been much more interesting if you made it so that all his alternate self we’re starting off at the same time and by using the meta knowledge he has directed them into power while providing himself information and advanced blueprints.

    Ch 1 Chapter - 1
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    Marvel: The Spider in Endless Sea of Possibilities
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino8mth
    Commented

    Wait so parallel versions of him are already so strong despite him still being so young

    I had seen Gwen turn into Spider-woman, Cindy turn into Silk, Mary into Carnage. I had fought alongside the Fantastic Four and Silver surfer against Galactus. I have seen the universe be destroyed and rebuilt a variety of times.
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  • Rayodino
    Rayodino8mth
    Commented

    Better than just taking it

    But I didn't want to hit him and attract attention, I let go of his wrist that I had held in a strong grip to let him know that he had no hope of fighting me.
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