StrikerAuthor
I don't like the pulling of abilities directly from an anime, and then describing them as, " the same abilities as Mc from "this" show". it reads like a kid just combining different abilities from his favorite shows. like a fanfic novel. I don't mind taking the abilities, but specifically referencing "that" show or "that" MC's abilities is cringy. At least change the name of the main ability, and have Damon think, "Sounds like the ability from a novel I read in my past life". indirect references reads better than copy-and-paste.
I noticed that you tend to copy-paste the same lines from previous chapters. For example, this one when the MC arrives in the second gate. you described a beautiful room full of art but then it turns into him being in an ocean surrounded by light clusters. From his arrival to selecting the new summon. It was the exact same lines. Also there is the part during his recent battle when you wanted him to use the blood eye spell that shoots into the sky. There is nothing wrong with that but they were fighting inside of a palace and you used the same sky description from the first battle he had upon entering the domain where the sky was on fire until the test was over. I'm loving the story so far but i really wish you would stop copy-paste the same lines from old chapters. It happened so many times now that it's become obvious to see and easy to point out.
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