I didn't know who she was until I read these comments. Now that I know, it does feel kinda gay even though she is female. I'll just keep thinking it's Edward, you know?

why make him say the exact set of words that will make any woman get angry. Also why make him act all guilty and talk like he did something horrible to her when it was all her actions that led to the outcome. This takes away from the smart and clever MC you painted for us in the previous chapters. Don't tell me you plan to make him look cool in everything except when dealing with women. Then he turns into a weak willed idiot that is scared of girls just because she is unjustifiably mad. If so that's a shame to ruin the good image of the MC like this.

why make him such a beta male with these women. first it was the physical abuse with Nami and now it's the verbal abuse with Betty. I don't expect him to be all hardcore with women but having some self-respect should be the bare minimum at least.

Why all the male pronouns in a world full of women. it's weird hearing you go back and forth between he and she in the same scene when everyone there is women. The MC has been a woman this entire time, I don't see the need to keep switching. This was happening in V1 and V2 as well.

please post more chapters for this story because I am loving it. I was so surprised when I saw this story get updated and couldn't wait to read the latest chapter.

Honestly this forced relationship is killing it for me. Also the stupid situation at the hot spring made me almost drop this story. If this is going to be the norm in this fic then I need to find a better one. It's bad enough he's a gross simp. no that's it. he's a gross simp and it's making the story hard to read.

So far I'm liking the story although I can't say I am of the same opinion about the waifu choice but everyone is different. Also that part with the MC talking about absorbing her tears and stuff made me cringe to the point that I almost felt disgusted. That my friend is going to bit too far with the simping. I highly recommend the author make Rimiru be a healthy simp and not a gross simp, if he's going to go in that direction otherwise you're just going to keep grossing people out. Aside from that everything's looking pretty good so far please keep up the good work. This story has been holding my attention for now

there will always be someone with a dominant role in a relationship. that's just human nature and it's not unhealthy to be dominant it's unhealthy to be dominant in the wrong way. which unfortunately we see many examples of being dominant in the wrong way in this world.

I liked the idea for this story but the MC savior complex is taking the excitement out of this. I mean how can a person that's fused with millions of entities that run on negative emotions be so positive to the point that it's disturbing. I don't expect the MC to be evil but this savior complex is grossing me out. It just feels very unnatural and forced. With this guy's personality to be this positive despite being mostly grimm. Even if his base was a 15 year old boy, it still doesn't change the fact that he is majority grimm and by a very large number of grimm at that. It would make more sense if he started out evil but slowly gained a sense of humanity and positivity over time while staying with Salem because he had to overcome all the negativity of his grimm side. That would have felt more like a natural progression for this story then this forced goody to shoes behavior we are getting right from the start. Sorry I'm ranting, it's just that i really like your work and this story got my hopes up.

Why am I not surprised the author had her kidnapped. We all know the MC isn't able to save her nor is he strong enough to do it. I have read a lot of stories that have this troupe. I've been loving this story so far, I really hope it's not about to go downhill with this.

this story has been really interesting to read and I especially like the time the author put into world building and flushing out the characters in this story.

Can you show proof of your claim.

They are his clones with the same mind and everything. He can't NTR himself because they are him. He isn't missing out on anything because he gets all of their experiences and memories too. It would make more sense if he made a clone and someone else took over the clone. Then it's NTR.

After reading these comments I see where everyone is coming from. To be honest when I started reading this after the situation with Drake I find it hard to continue the story as well. For me I recognize that it was not an NTR situation but it felt like the author wanted to rub the potential of a love interest in this guy's face and then completely break his spirit. Knowing that he is stuck on this ship and have to live with these people. So it felt more to me like he was going for emotional damage more so than specifically NTR even though the entire situation felt NTR ish which I'm sure the author is well aware of. After reading this part of the story I came to the understanding that the author may intend to write a story where the MC is humiliated by the people around him while he is weak and maybe when he gets stronger their attitudes may change but I've seen this trope so very often in Japanese literature that it's become kind of sickening at this point. Not saying that I expect the MC to be hardcore or badass from the start but I get tired of seeing male MCs come into these worlds and have zero self respect or completely going with the flow with everything that's done to them whether they like it or not. Also anyone that knows the Fate verse could tell by the author's choice of females to put around the MC that he was not going to be treated well and to have the only guy other than him on the ship bang the girl he was working his ass off to get right after showing up. Only to then not only have it rubbed in his face by the woman but he also had to endure the BRO pep talk from the guy that screwed him in the first place. I had to drop it after this point. The type of humiliation the author chooses for this guy will definitely make men uncomfortable. I don't know if the guy will eventually get laid but to me I don't think it's worth being treated like that just to maybe get some affection. I'm not just talking about Drake, I did read a bit more and the thing with Artemis is just pathetic. Any man that gets stronger like that will always be a BETA male no matter how strong he gets. Sorry for the rant.

So are we seriously going to let Sasuke keep insulting this guy every chance he gets and Naruto just smiles and ignores it. I can understand the author wanting him to be more intelligent and mature but let's not forget he is an uzumaki and they don't take insults lightly. Also it's just not in his character to allow someone to keep insulting him and getting away with it. Another thing is this trying to be Sakura's friend. Why do this when he already has Hinata, Ino, and Tenten to be his women. why still care about Sakura who is just plain annoying in almost every scene she is in.

I really wish the author wouldn't make this guy out to be such a little pervert. I can understand being a virgin but that doesn't mean everyone that's a virgin is that big of a coward or a pervert. that scene would have been better in my opinion if he simply flirted with the lady and things led to some light petting and kissing but didn't go any further than that. That's a lot better than just waiting on her to fall asleep then touching her only to then pretend like nothing happened, like that's super creepy. It's even worse because it's happening more than once. Every time he gets a perverted mission where he has to touch her.

yeah this sounds like it's going to be interesting so far. looking forward to more chapters.

what makes it even worse is the girl that was supposedly in love with the MC moved into another place with another girl and spends all of her time with that girl and they go at it like rabbits. There is no faster way to make a harem go sour than to add a woman that is mostly lesbian and only with the MC do to circumstances. It's clear that she has no real feelings for the MC and he looks like a cuck in his own house. now it looks like the main relationship that started this whole thing feels fake. Like his girlfriend doesn't actually love him as much as she claims to because as soon as Felicia joined. All of the Main girlfriends attention went to her and she seems to largely be focused on her relationship with Felicia and not the MC. once I started getting the cuck vibes from the story I had to drop it. I even came back to read the comments only to discover that the person that ruined the harem to begin with is now hooking up outside of the harem. So not only is the MC being cucked by Felicia but also NTR as well. I have to wonder if this was the original plan for the author because if it was I would have preferred to see it in the tags before I started reading this story.

I didn't like that the author included her in the Harem to begin with. it's not exciting when you introduce a female that is mostly lesbian and only kind of into the guy that she is supposed to be with.

Wait wasn't his other half still in the bleach verse? so does this mean he can go to multiple verses so long as he has a clone?