Comments of chapter undefined of I Can Upgrade My Talent In Everything
I Can Upgrade My Talent In Everything
MadScythe
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...Good story but give more details, not just "She is white and her hair is long" firstly i promise you everyone assumed she was white no one thought otherwiseđ bc u authors never have characters who are anything other than white. Secondly give details about their eye color and hair color and height. Alot more imagery could be used as well tbh but its okay its not needed
What is the point of making this guy a transmigrator? This seems to happen a lot, authors make their characters transmigrators or whatever solely for the sake of it when there is no real reason for it. It's detrimental to both the character and the story as it creates a disconnect between the protagonist and both the life and emotions of the person they have inhabited as well as their new world.
