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  • 747661167
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    WHAT??? I THOUGHT SHE WAS GOING TO BE A HAREM MEMBER??

    Ch 40 A Sudden Development
    Esper Harem in the Apocalypse
    Urban · NoWoRRyMaN
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  • 747661167
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    Where can I find the image that you've used for the cover? The one with the black dress, ruby necklace and the pink-orange hair?

    Ch 1 Awakening (1)
    Reincarnated With SSS Deathless Skill in Female Dominated World!
    Fantasy · HomieLv1
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  • 747661167
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    Could've done Incubus/Vampire instead of Ero Vampire, it sounds a bit dumb

    Race: Ero-Vampire
    My Erotic Wives In Another World
    Fantasy · Crimson_Tyrant
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  • 747661167
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    I am very much hoping that these are just rumors. I like the concept of this novel, but if Rena is actually like this then I'm going to drop it.

    There was a rumour she would let you fuck her for a mere $10.
    My Erotic Wives In Another World
    Fantasy · Crimson_Tyrant
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  • 747661167
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    I would divide the disciples into a bunch of different courts, since you can't go around giving ridiculous talent to everyone. Elders - Strong and trustworthy women who are qualified to teach. Master's Court - Sect Master's Women - ridiculous talent blessing. Upper Court - Trustworthy and strong vassals - lots of resources. Lower Court - Normal disciples/fodder - minimal resources. Maybe the lower two could have multiple levels.

    Ch 44 A City into a Vassal?
    Heavenly Harem Sect
    Action · ADboy245
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  • 747661167
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    I feel like that's incredibly stupid, giving up their nobility for the sake of being subservient to Heavenly Harem Sect without even consulting him first or asking whether he is willing to take you on. If I was in Daniel's position I would keep the sect as a small but highly elite force.

    Ch 43 A Vassal?
    Heavenly Harem Sect
    Action · ADboy245
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  • 747661167
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    You mean to tell me he is how old and doesn't understand that abusive parents exist?

    "I never thought a parent like you could ever exist and don't tell me that you've done nothing wrong," Daniel said.
    Heavenly Harem Sect
    Action · ADboy245
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  • 747661167
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    Hm, not sure about putting him immediately at Half-Immortal, since he doesn't even know martial techniques and has no combat experience. He had no idea how to use the power he had at 1st Mortal, alone Half-Immortal.

    Ch 14 Effortlessly Breaking through
    Heavenly Harem Sect
    Action · ADboy245
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  • 747661167
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    Only question I have is, do the guys who are getting green hats deserve to be?

    (This is an extremely overpowered Protagonist where the Main Concept is what the title of the novel sounds like, and it's a wish-fulfilment type of novel where there are Harem, Yandere, Milf and Netori). If you are not interested in amateurish work, pleasure turn the wheels around)
    Heavenly Harem Sect
    Action · ADboy245
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  • 747661167
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    that's a bit much, 7-9 is best. At a certain point extra inches becomes useless because it doesn't fit anyway.

    Ye Chen's meat stick size was 11 inches and the size was almost the same as Zhao Yanyan's wrist.
    Journey To Become A True God
    Eastern · DarkForces
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  • 747661167
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    disgust?

    Ye Chen concentrated the energy of his disgust on his palms, he then began massaging Master Lin Rouxi's thighs.
    Journey To Become A True God
    Eastern · DarkForces
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  • 747661167
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    porn is immoral

    He connected to a neighbor's wifi and opened a porn site to watch some cultured video.
    Esper Harem in the Apocalypse
    Urban · NoWoRRyMaN
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  • 747661167
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    What is the point of making this guy a reincarnator if it has no bearing on the story? Hate when people do that, it creates a disconnect between the protagonist and the life of the person they now inhabit and weakens any relationships or experiences they have.

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  • 747661167
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    that's the best you could come up with? what about "Bovine" instead

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  • 747661167
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    scum, hope he dies horribly.

    Ch 29 29. Flame snake
    Birth of the Demonic Sword
    Eastern · Eveofchaos
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  • 747661167
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    Your writing is pretty good.

    Ch 19 Preparation
    I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy
    Fantasy · WhiteNightingale
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  • 747661167
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    Is he going to get any strength himself or just rely on his summons?

    Ch 8 Chapter 8: Animus Overdrive
    Summoner: Monster Girl Harem!
    Fantasy · Duke_Asmodeus
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  • 747661167
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    Is this Erian? Why would you have him do this?

    A male youth not older than 16 was running with all his might, expending most of his nuclear energy as a vein glowed crimson right next to his heart.
    Blood Titan System
    Fantasy · Typhlix
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  • 747661167
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    What is the point of making this guy a transmigrator? This seems to happen a lot, authors make their characters transmigrators or whatever solely for the sake of it when there is no real reason for it. It's detrimental to both the character and the story as it creates a disconnect between the protagonist and both the life and emotions of the person they have inhabited as well as their new world.

    Ch 1 Unknown World
    I Can Upgrade My Talent In Everything
    Fantasy · MadScythe
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    What is the point of making this guy a transmigrator? This seems to happen a lot, authors make their characters transmigrators or whatever solely for the sake of it when there is no real reason for it. It's detrimental to both the character and the story as it creates a disconnect between the protagonist and both the life and emotions of the person they have inhabited as well as their new world.

    Ch 1 High-grade Defective Serum
    Blood Titan System
    Fantasy · Typhlix
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