i hope she'll keep using her mana tho.. like, mainly her mana.. yes she train with the curse energy, but not using it that much unless it's necessary .

is she try to make him the sun for attention while she become the shadow, unnoticable?

yes and that what make it even weirder.. he lost part of his soul with hoping get something OP but dissapointed because he didn't get it, i understand this.. what i think weird is, why he not try to talk with that 'voice' any further? he lost part of his soul, so surely he get something that equivalent with what he lost.. the world surely is not that unfair for giving him something useless in return after scrificing his "soul".. i know he is not in his right state of mind with everything what happen to him, but atleast make him talk with the voice to know, to understand what it is even just a little bit.. guess he's not in the state for conversation then.. tho i know it Will explained later..

why he decided to change now infront of his opponent which make him wide open? why he not just use throne of heroes before hand when he found the criminals? is the power make him arrogant or something?

it's kinda weird for the MC to give up on that 'voice in his head' just because it cant give him op power or weapon.. he know he get that 'voice' by sacrificing part of his soul or whatever it is, so why he not question the 'voice' any further? maybe it can't 'give' him op power or weapon, but maybe he 'know' how to make MC powerful enough(and we also know that he would become powerful in the future).. so it just weird for him to just give up like that despite knowing the price that he give to get it and choose death..

so far so good, but personaly i kinda want to see ayanokoji or Horikita POV

huh, i like this idea.. but the problem is, i don't think the other members, especially Superman, would like MC's way of handling villain..

is it normal out there for a man flirting with woman on their first meet? cuz i often Saw author do this.. everytime even..

im gonna ask this before i continue, is he gonna be those who have "no kill" rules or not?

remember what Alastor said "A smile is valuable tool. It's inspires your friends, keeps your enemies guessing, and to ensure that no matter what comes to your way, you're the one in control"

she didn't kill him?

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Madara join guild? never happen.. he either make one or just go solo

it is noticeable.. some of the paragraf indeed kinda hard to understand, but i dont' really mind it.. but maybe there's someone who complain about it in the future.. maybe after you translate it with Google translate, try use grammarly to correct the mistakes..

oh, ok, sorry for that.. it just, there's part that seems like it translated using Google translate or something.. or maybe you write the story in your native language and then translate it with translator(like google translate and the others)? if yes then that's also make sense..

if yes, can i aks link for the raw version ?

is this translated fanfic ?

btw, they Will not join the justice league or teen Titans, right?

wait, what? why suddenly change the world? i think you can still explore(?) the dc universe first tho..

human mental is not that weak for God sake.. if the Hero know why he do that, they Will not go around the city and kill innocent people, because they know why they do that and what their goals..