Comments of chapter undefined of Game of Thrones: Dovahkiin

Your english isn’t bad (well to me) it’s better than most garbage people be posting nowadays.

Will the MC become king? I hope at least he doesn't become anyone's subordinate.

Some grammar mistakes and awkward sentence structure but overall a good first chapter.

godamn this is gonna be a stroll in the park😂

Lyanna stark as love interest? She is the closest thing he will find as a woman from tamriel

I thank you for the chapter and hope you continue. This already seems very interesting.

Good novel and I hope it is not be hiatus.

Cool, I actually like that mc isn't knowledgeable about plot since he already has op powers.

many people complaint''s but after i read more than 100 fanfic or novels, i found nothing in this chapter that was bad myself, instead a few cool moments, good start, thanks

english at least can be readable. i believe you can improve more if you keep writing and at the same time receive a positive criticism. i once read an indian person write about madara's grandson here in wn, at first same like you, he/she can write passable english. later on, he keep improving and the story become much more enjoyable day by day.

this story is starting off real good I can't wait for the future chapters. 👍😎👍😎

Stupid naming I say. Get some smell of moron and utter newbie. Hope there won't be mistakes, that brainless authors make nowadays right and left

does the grammar ever improve?

👍

thanks for the really great chapter

Thanks for the chapter

I became really doubtful about this novel since he wished fir GOW kratos strength. In the newest game, Kratos lifted the island where the Nine world tree place is. It was said by developers that it weighs a total weight of NINE WORLDS WHICH WEIGHS AT A UNIVERSES LEVEL. That means Krqyos is as strong as 9 UNIVERSES. Keratosis also dodged Apollo's sun attacks that travels FTL. Yep. He too op. But I'm still gonna read. Maybe there is still q chance it is good. I hope so.

Are you updating soon

should be leather armor bruv. .not letter. .but your grammar is quite good