Mr_Stan
Great job with capturing Uncle Ben’s character you really hit spot on with his speech to the MC. Especially, with the speech he gave to the MC it felt more personal and customized him considering his situation. With other fanfics always giving the same quote “with great power comes great responsibility” you really did a great job with the getting the MC to accept his situation. As well as moving forward as his own version of Spider-Man and what it means to him.
Great chapter, this spider-man, he is more like an anti-hero than a typical normal hero, I just hope he thinks about splitting spider-man time and Parker time, with the help of either technology like nano spiders or giving spider-Gwen powers or both, not just wanting to do everything alone, other spider-men already made that mistake and look what happened to them, their loved ones died for that mistake or were worse, in a spider-man version where Gwen ended up badly with someone else's son, luck.
Whilst Alex Parker get a very different Great power ,Great Responsibility speech from Uncle Ben ( definitely nailed Uncle Ben characterization ). As our Alex will be something more than spectacular , Superior than Peter Parker Spider-Man , Alex Parker willcome to be known as the Legandary Spider-Man . Continue on Cheers "Who am I ,you're sure want to know " the Story of my life ,is not for the faint of heart , If somebody said it was happy little tale , if somebody told I was average ordinary guy without a care in the world ,Somebody lied. "This is my gift ,this is my curse " Call me Spider-Man .end quote .