EvansKannon
Thank you for the chapter and such a long one too! I agree with your lil' rant at the end. Nice change of pace from other ff where they play pokemon and catch em' all from heroes to women and start a multi billion $ company in 3 months. I'd prefer not to summon saeko or shego tbh, I like Isabella so far. I think more interesting characters could be chosen than the other two but obviously its your story and I wont mind either way. Pst summon John wick get 10/10 loyalty by giving him a puppy and have him take over kingpin.
It would be fun if he helped Magneto create the Mutant Nation Genosha earlier here. Marvel Fanfics always makes the mc against Charles and Eric, often making Charles as a "greater good" villain and . It would be fun seeing someone writing Magneto as a good-ish guy and someone that actually just wants the best for mutants instead of a power hungry supremacist and the two becoming buddies.
amazing. Keep up the good work. It is this high quality of writing, amazing content, the fact that this is a marvel fanfiction, relatively slower progression of events and long length of chapters that keeps me coming back for more and keeps this book in my library. Thank you for this amazing chapter.
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Well as far as summons go I don't see a problem with having to put use of resources that are available to you. Not to mention that they will be loyal which is quite hard to come by in a world like marvel until and unless someone uses mind manipulation on them. Shego would be a good addition as the MC would have someone who could help him build a spy network. Saeko could be a good muscle or bodyguard if given some powers and assimilate the muichiro card in her. Her sadistic tendency could be used against the gangs of New York. I believe having more summon who are loyal to the MC will help in making his own group which is needed in a world like marvel.
I think itâs okay not to have a Grand Goal TM. If it was me, I totally would just get me some power, enjoy my life, travel the world/universe. Participate in some cool events, meet people, prevent some bad plots and awful things happening to good people. Oh! I also would enjoy some schadenfreude! I even would not try to get a harem or a single girl, to be honest. Maybe passively. I mean, I am pretty amourosâŠor what do you call someone not interested in romance?
I think your doing great and thanks for the chapter only suggestions i have would dont fall for the common plot holes nerfing your mc obviously under using not utilizing a power him making mistakes is fine as long as he grows from it not make common mistakes constantly or making the same ones several times or making him dense af to things