RomanceFanatic028
Chapter 3 is already intriguing in its own way. Love how it lays down its impending plot, the style is a little bit more to the Japanese LN first-person style which I usually read, although it also inherits its bad side like the lack of description in the scenery. Like for example, if they are in the forest... As they enter, they should be greeted by the chirping of crickets, the earthy aroma of the land and leaves, and the cool shade cast by the surrounding trees that contrast with the warm rays of the sun.