Comments of chapter undefined of The Extra's Survival

his havs great potential I recommend you find a editor to polish your righting a bit. it's not unreadable right now but it's difficult to keep paying attention with the subtle mistakes the story seems very cool, I hope it goes well

I hope down the line of the novel you are able to explain the reason for his system similar to how demon system or blood system explains why they have systems

Well, time to start reading a new novel.

That grammer tho

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Very cool start

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My heart pained**

can anyone tell me the author of dawn of legend so I can find it please

Had I spent more time with my family**

I just can't wrap my head around to why people don't like to stay away from the cliche. 1. Teen 2. Handsome 3. System etc etc btw I really appreciate it the actual MC doesn't use swords and have an op system on it's hand (spear and son of duke) that was different and I like it but rest same old same old. I hope someone will help me find that's something different from the trend . . and how did he know he was extra ? I mean you can't really remember every character you have read (ignore it just wrote what was on my mind while reading)

i love the starting so i will give a power stone

Train the talented, groom is kinda.. not suitable

I thought someone had saved me or I thought someone saved me**

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