Thanks for the chapter

The sheep kind

Well, since you can comment on my comment. Then you can read.

Thanks for bringing me a smile. Nothing like knowing there is a bigger moron than yourself.

Well, I don’t know about fan theory’s and stuff. But from what I know, the reason Harry is left with the Dursleys is because the only other options is the Malfoys and Serius Black because of the weird blood protection law wizards have. Meaning that a child must go to a reletive (reletive by blood or law) if the parents pass. This is why Harry is left there even after the Dursleys showed signs of being affected by the horcruces (idk if I spelt that right). Not cause Dumbuldor is some crazy dude playing chess. And while I do find him manipulative, like come on. Yes, he will read your mind, yes, he will include you in his plans cause he’s 116, and yes, he will question slytherians cause they have history. You know? Voldamort. He’s not some evil character, just a good guy that doesnt mind using morally grey means.

So the fanfiction is definitely different than the usuall. In a good way. I'm only on chapter 9 currently, but it has a pretty good start. A bit slow, but it all kinda comes together. If there's one thing to comment on, it's azula. I don't her father would go that far in her punishment. She's pretty much the reason why he was made to be crown prince. As his brother lost his child at war. Zuko, while could be a replacement, has already been established as the failure by his father. So I’m curious how that plays out. Will he call back Azula for coronation, will zuko just be the new azula? Or will they both be banished.

Respect. I hate how everyone hates on aang cause he doesn't kill the fire lord or because he acts like a kid. That's legit the second best part of the show right after the zuko and azula fight. And he is literally a kid. Plus, how can you not respect the fact that he won't go against his morals. Something most will do for any amount of money nowadays.

Dude, grow up. Just cause one man likes an*l doesnt mean another needs to like it. Especially if there are no warnings at the beginning of the novel. No one likes being dragged around for 50 chapters just to find out the author may be hinting that the main character could have a different preference than yourself, meaning that character will describe his preference throughout the story. If your not of that preference, it gets uncomfortable incredibly fast. And before you start throwing words like homophob, I’m pointing this out because your demonizing a comment over an ‘Eew’. You can say I have low tolerance, but really? An Eew?

Makes sense, it’s hard to like Yun Che since he destroys an entire realm from existance just to spite one woman.

Cool

That would have been dope. Not a lot of horror fanfiction

If he lives in America he should be fine. If someone pulls a knife on you it is actually legal to kill in self defense. Not to mention the fact that it’s not his knife and the teen stabbed himself in the scuffle. The other teens who ran would most likely be charged as well for a misdemeanor.

True but tbh, it gunna be boring real fast when he just starts making himself a litteral god. I’ve read to many fanfics like that and the result every time is the author dropping because even they get bored writing something like that. If the fanfic was comedy based I would agree but since it’s fighting oriented, the moment he can do literally any justsu and uses every kekkei genkai the author won’t be able to keep up. There will be no enemy to give him a challenge nor obstical he can’t overcome within seconds. Not to mention the mc is already a bit to overpowered. Low key im starting to worry about the pacing as after only a couple of years( if even that) he somehow knows almost everything about the human body. What is he going to work towards in the future? Will there be anything he can strive for? What challenges will there be for him when he’s already this op? Once a fanfic reaches that point the whole plot usually ends up revolving around who he wants to kill and save in seconds, then a brief description on why. Don’t believe me? Just look up naruto fanfics and give a read to the unfinished dripped ones.

I might be wrong but I’m pretty sure the multi shadow clone jutsu isn’t public or clan knowledge. The shadow clone is available but the multi should be a pretty guarded secret. But it’s a fanfic so I’m not to stingy on details

Fun fact, the left side of the brain actually controls the right side of the body and vise versa.

DOpe, I also think it’s funny how everyone is obsessed about it being a myth. Does it being a myth make Lucy a bad movie? Does Qi not being real make it weird to write about? lOl

I just gotta say, I was increasingly sceptical about this fan fiction. Especially after seeing his OP golden finger. But this fight scene has been by far the best in a naruto fanfiction I’ve read. I get so tired of seeing a blade user or genjutsu user act like there fighting when all they do is spam some OP jutsu. In all honesty, after reading this one scene I almost feel like I’ve stained my eyes reading all those fight scenes. Please keep it up, and please don’t fall into the trap of OP jutsu spamming cause there boring. I can only imagine a rasengan or big earth spikes so many times before it gets stale.

Personally, I’m fine paying 5 bucks or less for extra chapters on a Patreon. But when they ask for 20 bucks so I can see all the content, I’m low key fuming. I don’t even pay that much on my Netflix subscription. Not to mention I’m not even getting 3 hours worth of content from your “10 extra chapters”.

I’m assuming this is a nerf to make the novel more interesting.

Nice story, but I just want to say that this chapter, I feel like was kinda unnecessary since you just said that quirks can change personality’s in the last chapter. And the whole double personality doesn’t make sense, he said they were merging but also said he would help him learn haki. Lastly, and this is just something to work on in passing as it is by no means easy, try making it less of a info dump and just hint or mention info on passing. Just some things I noticed.