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edu_rodeiro3hCommentedcorporate theft has been smeared All Over that brand
" It's not expensive, sister, not expensive at all. The prices are excellent and reasonable. For example, for a mobile phone with the same configuration, Huawei store only sells for three or four thousand, while others sell it for seven or eight thousand. " Liu Yong said.- edu_rodeiro10hReplied to edu_rodeiroCh 1 Life of a Handsome Security Guard
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I know, what I mean isif the author purposely only shields his mind from reincarnation knowledge. it means he intends for the mc to have an enemy who will take advantage of the mc with mind skillshe is leaving a "backdoor" to have a reason to have the mc fail against a mind attacker
[Memories of the previous life and the knowledge of the current plot of the Marvel Universe will be protected by the system. No one would be able to read, breach or exploit this part of user's memories. Only the user has access to these memories and knowledge.]detailUnleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel UniverseMovies · Story_Teller_229 - edu_rodeiro10hReplied to 7rox
than all the gamer stories with gamer mind skill wouldn't exist
[Memories of the previous life and the knowledge of the current plot of the Marvel Universe will be protected by the system. No one would be able to read, breach or exploit this part of user's memories. Only the user has access to these memories and knowledge.]detailUnleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel UniverseMovies · Story_Teller_229 - edu_rodeiro1dCommented
sigh. .. nothing against genderbedered stories. .. but meh. .it's not appealingthe reason why fanfics flourish is bc you can give a slight different possibility to the original story. but changing gender is too extreme and makes the story too far from the original. you could say that gender bending is just adding your touch to the story, true, but it's still weird to read. .. . . and it creates a lot of holes for the future of the story
Ch 3 At last, at the majestic gates of Konoha! - edu_rodeiro1dCommented
this looks ai generated... this description are way too weird, they don't feel realistic like you should describe to us "blood atack" rolar "dragon claw" evade the atack "blood explosion" boomlike it's a joke but it tells the truth, I don't want to read how graceful his moves are without being actually shown what he is doing
With each graceful movement, Daimon demonstrated his mastery of combat. His body seemed to flow with the rhythm of the battle, every step, every parry, every attack executed with effortless elegance. - edu_rodeiro1dCommented
literally have second hand gold buyers in most shoppings in my city
But how else I was supposed to sell gold coins inscribed with runes from another world? Where else could I find a buyer for gold who would ask no questions for the gold's source, even if it came at a cost of a steep fee?detailRiches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!Fantasy · MotivatedSloth - edu_rodeiro2dCommented
bruh it's not as though curses are powerful or even common... Hidan is an exceptionwhy would people even want his body
Mifune's eyes bore into each elder's, a silent plea for cooperation and shared wisdom. "I implore you," he concluded, "to share any information, any leads, no matter how obscure they may seem. For in the pursuit of understanding, we may find the means to protect the legacy of the Land of Iron." And as he made this earnest request, his voice softened, carrying a tone of discretion. "However," he added, "I urge you all to conduct this investigation in the utmost secrecy. We cannot afford to let knowledge of Seiji's condition reach ears beyond this council. The safety of the Land of Iron and the well-being of our young ward depends on it." - edu_rodeiro2dCommented
what. he can literally navigate vacuum space.. just jump
Even someone as strong as Saitama couldn't go against the gravity of the planet and fly. - edu_rodeiro4dReplied to Reistlan
I feel like when a new chapter is out you can just skip to the last paragraphThats probably all you need to Reed to know that the rest was overextended not needed narrations and descriptions that could be shortened or deleted the story is good but the biggest problem is that this is being milk is so much that every chaoter feels empty, ithe sensation you get while reading is as thought it has been purposely stretched and delayed
Ch 69 Ch-69 Jiryoku defeated? - edu_rodeiro5dCommented
these stories are always ruined buy not needed powers.. he already has logia light fruit... why give him a system
"Hello, Yu," the person calmly smiled and said, "I am your Digitized Gene System. Congratulations on successfully activating me." - edu_rodeiro6dCommented
this is just forced. .they are would boundif a soul uses memoriesa fake being that isn't really alive like a celestial Buslhit that is such a weird concept shouldn't really remember it either
"Are you forgetting her Celestial Spirit that can talk to her?" Amidst the sound of his footsteps in the long empty hallways, Xu Shan spoke. - edu_rodeiro6dCommented
well I would guess that he would have figured out in the previous run, after all if it's true, it would be a gradual improvementnot something he just realizes in the 4th run
"...or do humans become smart after dying four times?" - edu_rodeiro7dCommented
this seems a bit too much of a nerf? even if he just got the powerseven in one piece when they just ate the fruit they already have more powers than thismomonosuke was an exceptionand Luffy was a kid when he first got it
'If it were Whitebeard, he would have turned the whole mansion upside down,' John thought. He quickly grabbed the serum on the circular device because he knew that the liquid in the tube was very important to the other party.detailUnleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel UniverseMovies · Story_Teller_229 - edu_rodeiro9dReplied to TorhelmCh 16 Update