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Comments of chapter undefined of Mushoku Tensei: Magic Swordsman

Lazy_Rapter
Lazy_RapterLv14Lazy_Rapter

I don't know if you will see this but I have a suggestion thats in the middle of both your points- something new but also different, switch sylvie place with rudeus. so rudeus and eris goes towards the capital while sylvie goes and meets ruijerd

MDNick
MDNickLv14MDNick

1 Though I really want the second option, the familiarity will allow for mc to get the eyeball and author can do things that the original story didn't do.[img=recommend]

Lucif3r_069
Lucif3r_069Lv4Lucif3r_069

i dont mind either honestly but i would prefer if the Boreas family members didnt die. i dont know about the novel since i am an anime only fan so i think they died. i would love to avoid that if possible. and wherever they teleport, i think having ruijerd with them would be the best as Rudeus could also learn things from him.

stefanus101
stefanus101Lv14stefanus101

first! !!

Anubis_Creationz
Anubis_CreationzLv4Anubis_Creationz

I prefer the demon continent arc. So I vote 1.

Evade
EvadeLv4Evade

why not proceed on both route, go on demon continent but bigger, device own plot connecting the canon for easier transition. considering the demon continent wasn't really mapped out on the novel you could create your own background. great story keep it up!

MrWayneStone
MrWayneStoneLv11MrWayneStone

2, teleport rudeus with his mom or the maid with a sister, teach sister his magic sword style, or hasten his meet up with sylphie to the magic academy.

no_to_supp_abuse
no_to_supp_abuseLv1no_to_supp_abuse

Thanks for the chapter! He should get some items for his fam and sylphy back in Buena as well. Unless...you plan to make him regret not doing it for character growth and drama.

Sinofwrath
SinofwrathLv5Sinofwrath

Funk canon if author can some how make him meet the demon empress to get a mgic eye that would be awesome

abc123faefgasc
abc123faefgascLv4abc123faefgasc

I think the issue is if rudy and eris get teleported somewhere else that means logically everyone else also gets teleported randomly... This has huge ramifications like people who died surviving and people who lived dying and certain people wouldn't meet like with rujeird or slyphy and the princess. If you have a concrete idea of what you want to do and where you'd want to take the story then thats great but I think it could quickly become overwhelming and confusing if you change things without think of the consequences.

Daoist_opmclover
Daoist_opmcloverLv1Daoist_opmclover

2 option place for kingdom building

RaijinGod
RaijinGodLv4RaijinGod

Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter. 😁

NathanPresotto
NathanPresottoLv2NathanPresotto

2...best waifu eris

Roxysmo_Forever
Roxysmo_ForeverLv3Roxysmo_Forever

Thanks for the chapter

Angel_Guzman_1756
Angel_Guzman_1756Lv1Angel_Guzman_1756

1 Sigue el canon pero sin morir la familia de eris, aparte el continente demonĂ­aco es una parte que no se puede quitar ya que serĂĄ importante mĂĄs adelante en la historia y sobre todo ruijerd supard

Mainga_Ndeke
Mainga_NdekeLv1Mainga_Ndeke

Demon continent... Complete originality leaves greatest likelihood of story faliure because it demands too much of the author

Fallenknight
FallenknightLv4Fallenknight

2 please

Makhambet_Malik
Makhambet_MalikLv1Makhambet_Malik

2

ksetiadi
ksetiadiLv15ksetiadi

1st, the journey from the Demon Continent back to the Asura Kingdom has alot of potential for the author to play around with. And thanks for the chapter author 🙏

Mr_Minotaur
Mr_MinotaurLv3Mr_Minotaur

There is no nanahoshi in this timeline so why even have a mana calamity. That was unique to og rudeus because both he and nanahoshi died by truck-kun. In this fanfic the mc was the only person who died by truck-kun