please make Edward's next song 'Rise Up' By Imagine Dragons. I think it suits him.

bruh constitution can't be made in one meeting atleast make it one year. it should be made while keeping past, present and future in mind. there should revisions and ammendments to leave less loopholes

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please add "I'm Still Standing by Elton John" It's really good song

author 9 days have passed

hey author their are is this guy named Chibikei who is repeating votes in "yes"

please keep it the way it was no Evelyn

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umm guys there's a problem u see I had exams when I started this so I put it on hiatus and then I forgot about it as offline school had started but now I came back and I don't remember what plans I had for the novel in my mind 😅😅😅😅

Yo, what is this liliths goal man I Mean, now it's all about adding new characters, adding more new characters and adding more new characters, heck he doesn't even show his strength to the world its kinda irritating and please the whole thing about good holy place for creatures (azaroth) is kinda like improved version of Jura Federation Tempest (from Tensura) and he is a devil not a Saint so please stop saving every single person he sees injured and then that injured person automatically gets talented I mean it's kinda bad tbh.

Does he even have a pride, I am fine with being humble but that self- underestimating attitude of his quite annoying.

Is he stupid he just got attacked so he should lay low and increase his strength but if he blocks the marriage he will be in limelight and his abilities will also be shown and his two bodyguards who are his trump card will also be seen. This novel is getting worse chapter by chapter

U should first understand what's my question and that things that are in authors explanation does not include answer for my question

Nope he did not explain my question, he told that eresh will get pregnant and that Jack will become powerful and that the sacred gear of the new child he saved Is from FGO and that some characters will get added that's all and what I asked was what's the point of adding extra characters and those beta Mc motives (like saving those children is he a Saint or something and not a devil? {I understand they would become powerful but his motive was pity and sympathy} ) so my question was completely different from the explanation he wrote (reminder he wrote the explanation first and then I commented)

Why not disable the camera does he want to expose himself or something and there are spys in police as well so Giovanni will know this stupid Mc.

Trash chapter

Trash chapter

Author can u stop introducing new sacred gear our of nowhere and why is he involving himself in ww1, 2 I mean its pointless and does it have to be necessary to save every person who has tragic life to be saved I mean it's like beta Mc motives where every time Mc or his family sees someone tragic he or they save him I mean there is not even a need to give him extra characters as 1.)he doesn't want to expose his strength so he will never use any extra characters that much 2.)He already has a strong team, no need for extra strong character like Jack or the girl he saved in this chapter.

It would be good if he left the group as what we are reading right now is just original with an extra character named Mason who is stronger then ash and he knows what is the plot but he still chooses to stick around them when he knows that the group is trouble magnet and he is being held back plus if he staying for being part of cannon, it's not practical as there is no reader or audience in that world that will think wow there is new character with protagonist unless Mason breaks 4th wall, there are not many new things other then ash being more mature and Mason himself is like nanny for him and Mason needs to grow up, in this world its totally normal for there to be people with different thinking he can't get physical with everyone and that anger issue is also bad he needs to know that, world is like a coin that has two sides just because anime showed bright side doesn't mean it does not have dark side and dark side is equally important for a world to develope.

Although he is not antagonist but why is he showing goodwill towards Zhou yuan I Mean if he knew the future or read the novel and to form good relations with hero its acceptable but that not the situation here then why?