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Mr_Minotaur

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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur2d
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    Stop this chatgpt nonsense please. It totally ruins the flow of your story. I like what you've written so far, no need to muddy the waters trying to save time and sound intellectual.

    Ch 341 C341 Nosy Old Man
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    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur3d
    Commented

    Stop it. Get some help

    Ch 21 Chapter 21
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    Spider-Man Mayhem
    Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur3d
    Commented

    God. I can’t take it anymore. Too juvenile

    Ch 20 Chapter 20
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    Spider-Man Mayhem
    Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur5d
    Commented

    If he doesn’t kill these retards then he’s a massive chump

    Ch 12 Issue #12: X, The Expected.
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    Spider-Man X.
    Anime & Comics · Saintbarbido
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur6d
    Commented

    Nobody cares about this extra backstory

    My bastard of a father even sent me to a mental institution when he found my mental abilities, where I had been treated as a lab rat, I only escaped the fate of becoming a cold corpse when the Evil Mutant brotherhood kidnapped me. I have been beaten, toyed, harassed, and tortured countless times in my short life, and only after I gained power that I managed to escape the hell that has been my life.
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    A multiverse fan-fiction
    Anime & Comics · 41_Claws
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur6d
    Commented

    Finally. Pls don’t drop when it’s getting good author

    Chapter 78: Canon Begins
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    An Osmosian in Marvel (MCU Fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur6d
    Commented

    Oof rip to mc’s likeability

    On the one hand I am happy. Since this means I have a chance to make this orange-skin Amazon mine.
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    An Osmosian in Marvel (MCU Fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur6d
    Commented

    Crossovers ruin the story. It makes any plots stall since your writing focus pull in too many directions. Please tell me starfire is gonna be the only asspull, or else it’s time to skip

    Ch 61 Chapter 60: Title At The End
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    An Osmosian in Marvel (MCU Fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur6d
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    Bro marvel has enough characters and bad guys as is. There’s no need to corrupt it by pulling dc/other characters outta the woodwork. It’s lame as hell

    [Insert image of Koriand'r/Starfire here]
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    An Osmosian in Marvel (MCU Fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur6d
    Commented

    Curtly*

    "I do not." Laura cutely replied.
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    An Osmosian in Marvel (MCU Fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur1mth
    Commented

    Bro this stuff is just unnecessary complications, but you do you. So far it's been like one huuuge prologue and set up for the overarching conflict, even though it's been like 60 chapters. I'm scared we'll never get to Alacrya because the author is gonna drop before then. This is usually the problem with tbate fics, they just drop around the end of the xyrus arc.

    Ch 50 More questions than answers
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    The Beginning After the End - God of the Mana
    Anime & Comics · Haruto1028383
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur1mth
    Commented

    Lol author deployed strategic nerf attack against mc to add unnecessary drama

    Ch 15 Days before departure
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    The Beginning After the End - God of the Mana
    Anime & Comics · Haruto1028383
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur1mth
    Commented

    His aether abilities are kinda weak for personal power. Hopefully they get more powerful and he gets more, else he’ll play second fiddle to arthur. Also his legacy abilities are kinda nerfed, let’s see if they improve as he grows older I really hope author doesn’t try to forcibly “balance” mc when he made mc sound like a bundle of potential at the beginning of the story. Too man fics nerf the protagonist for artificial tension

    Ch 12 Rebirth
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    The Beginning After the End - God of the Mana
    Anime & Comics · Haruto1028383
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur1mth
    Commented

    This is boring because mc doesn’t really do anything special besides get stronger

    Ch 30 | Xyrus Academy (4) |
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    TBATE:Journey to The Horizon
    Anime & Comics · X_Y_Z
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur1mth
    Commented

    What happened to trying to fight arthur to test swordsmanship?

    Ch 18 | Discussion and Meeting |
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    TBATE:Journey to The Horizon
    Anime & Comics · X_Y_Z
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur1mth
    Commented

    Bro if you literally rewrote this story and ask for a patreon, then you could AT LEAST run it through spellcheck and grammarly. Just copy paste you chapter to google docs for spell check and grammarly for grammar, it’s not that hard!

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: A diving session
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    Meliodas In TBATE
    Anime & Comics · Nouflex
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur1mth
    Commented

    Lol the mispelling is understandable because some people (such as indians) pronounce "lavatory" as 'levoratory'. I never understood where the extra syllable came from but I'd gotten used to it on my trips to india

    I take off my youngling robes and hop into the sonic shower. It cleans me in seconds, and I'm now fully free of any odor or gunk. I exit the sonic shower and re robe. I should get my Jedi robes after Ilum. She must be saving those somewhere until I find my kyber crystal. I exit the levorotary and make my way to the booth in the common area of our ship. I don't want to disturb Master when she is meditating.
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    Star Wars: A Single Wish
    Video Games · easyread
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur1mth
    Commented

    this fkin kid wants answers on demand all the time.

    I look out the windows at the site of being in hyperspace. This is the first time I've seen the blue lights of hyperspace. "Why does hyperspace look like this, dad?" I ask my dad a question, and all I hear is an amused chuckle. I turn my head and see both my parents looking at me. Mom gets up from her seat and walks up beside me. She kneels and wraps one arm around me. She kisses the top of my head and ruffles my hair. I still haven't gotten an answer yet.
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    Star Wars: A Single Wish
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur1mth
    Commented

    tell me whyyy he shut off the force

    Well... Whatever he would make do.
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    Star wars: I don't want to be a Jedi
    Anime & Comics · Itsame_Mario
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  • Mr_Minotaur
    Mr_Minotaur1mth
    Commented

    archer can use that. why can't mc use it. IT MAKES NO SENSE!

    Pressing the button to turn the saber off, Colt sighed, if he wanted to use the lightsaber, he had to use the Force.
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    Star wars: I don't want to be a Jedi
    Anime & Comics · Itsame_Mario
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